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The Mother of all New Years Eves
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The Mother of all New Years Eves |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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The Mother of all New Years Eves You say it's a millennium? That this is something great to see A New Years Eve to celebrate The best that there will ever be? You say that the entire world Will be dancing in the streets The Mother of all New Years Eves A carnaval beyond belief? Why is this one special? It's just another thousand years Just another day gone by To cry another thousand tears What is New Years Eve without him? What's the use to celebrate? My feet won't dance another dance If this is going to be my fate So I'll just sit home by the fire And feel the comfort it imparts And treat with care and tenderness This Mother of all Broken Hearts Elizabeth Santos |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Uh, Liz?  Sad, miserable - beautiful poem. (Email has crashed...will write soon as I can) Hugs, K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kamla, I wrote this one as I was posting. I must be in a sad mood today. I'll try to cheer up and write something happier! Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
We all dance in the moves of sadness and while a time for joyous waltz is ever near the turns you sway must be complete before the next dance can begin... You don't have to always write cheerful things, my friend... More hugs, K |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
The mother of all broken hearts? Well let's mend that thang at once! Let this poem just be the start, And cheer ya up a bunch! First, get away from the fire, Get nekkid, go outdoors, All the guys you could desire, Will flock to you in scores. Forget those guys in cop cars, Pretend they don't exist, But if they should arrest you, You'd better not resist. Besides it could be pleasurable? (Handcuffed by guys in blue) The experience may be desirable? (Two cops and nekkid you) Might as well start off the year, Putting a smile on someone's face, Those cops may be quite lonely too? Till they take you to their place. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
LOL, Toerag!  - That'll definitely cheer Liz up! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Toerag, Get on over here! Liz |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Severn...I hope it does....Yanno a little poem is better to cheer someone up with then some of the alternatives..They've got drugs to bring ya down, drugs to cheer ya up....and though some poetry's addicting, it's still not as bad for ya...(Then again, I had several teachers, parents, and others that used to say I was a real pill?)Wonder what they meant?.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kamla and Toe, I don't need those guys in blue If I have got the two of you Thanks, guys Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 12-22-1999).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Severn....it seems as though "Liz" is looking for us to join her in a "threesome"....Menage'????...I'm game! You? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Toe, I'm laughing harder by the minute, but seriously, I don't think Kamla can make it (too far) Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hey you guys how about a foursome, I've been feeling a little lonesome. Great poem Liz. Love ya Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Would you please put those golf clubs away and get up here!! Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
At the risk of interrupting... *EG* Great poem, Elizabeth... the more hoopla there is, the harder it is sometimes to deal with knowing you won't have your special someone there to celebrate with. *G* But yanno... for a cheer-up team like you got, I'll get sad, too! LOL. Great poem, Toe!!! I like your poetic cheer dispensing very much! (And I'm sure they meant that "pill" as a compliment. LOL. I know I need my daily dose of you! *G*) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well Liz....it looks as though Sy's gonna go play with his balls..hope for a hole in one etc.....I heard he likes to swing? I wonder if he uses a "Wood"?... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Suthern, You won't ever be sad, my dear A gem of a fellow you have near To cheer up and old hen like me With his erotic poetry! Just keep him close Don't let him go You two have got something special We all know Liz |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Toe, Only Sy can answer for himself on this one. And he's not here to defend himself. Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Look guys, I think I could make it...I AM a butterfly remember? Hmmmm...I don't know though...tempting, yet...somehow...hmmmmm - this requires several hours pondering...I'll get back to you...later, MUCH later. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
OMG... the mental images! I think it'll take a crowbar to get them out my head. Batter up! Isn't it amazing the direction things can take when there's a Toe about? At first she was sitting all alone by the fire and the next thing ya know everybody's in bed together. Talk about politics making strange bed fellows! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kamla, Yes, you are a butterfly and how lovely Marge's poem about you. She did capture you in her words. Liz Andrew, You've given me another laugh! Thanks. Yes, things do get out of hand fast don't they. I'm still sitting by the fire, though. Thanks for the read. Liz |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I...uh... Geesh, after reading all of the ..er juicy replies, I've forgotten what the poem was about!!! Oh yes, I remember. This is a special New Year due to the fact that it only happens every thousand years. But after all this, I don't think you need cheering up any longer. LOL!! I'm just wondering why I haven't been invited?! Is there a such thing as menage a five???? eeeek! You people are bad influences!!!  *giggles*In any case, I wish you a very Happy New Year...no matter how you spend the evening, my dear. [This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 12-22-1999).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sally, Thanks, my friend, we wouldn't have left you out. But Sy decided to play golf instead, so it ruined everything. Gosh, you know Toe is a bad influence isn't he, but at least he cheered me up and so did you. Thanks for the comments, and Happy New Year! Liz |
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Menage #1 Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 28 |
..... Someone called???? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is too much, This was a sad poem, you know Now, I wonder who this could be??? Liz |
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