How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #4 Archive
 Unlucky one
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Unlucky one

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
starboards
Member
since 10-14-1999
Posts 469
longwood, florida


0 posted 12-22-1999 12:44 AM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for starboards

**Please be nice. It's my first time posting in here...**

Unlucky One

Words slip out...
Out his sugar coated lips...
Lips that have denied many...
Many except for me...
Me, the unlucky one.


 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"


[This message has been edited by starboards (edited 12-22-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 07-17-99
Posts 8273


1 posted 12-22-1999 12:46 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn



Sad - short and sad.
Here's a   for you...K

Michael
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 08-13-99
Posts 6333
California


2 posted 12-22-1999 12:48 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ouch - sometimes it's not so fun to be on top of the list.  Much can be read into these simple lines, I can only offer you     
Hope things get better for you. (And we'll treat you nice here, I promise).

btw, I would change the font color here - kind of hard on the eyes.

michael

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 12-22-1999).]
starboards
Member
since 10-14-1999
Posts 469
longwood, florida


3 posted 12-22-1999 12:56 AM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Thanks severn...your comments are always welcome...

michael...thank you for commenting, you are a familar face...

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


4 posted 12-22-1999 11:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This says so much with so few words...now that takes talent! I enjoyed this one starboards!  

 Denise


starboards
Member
since 10-14-1999
Posts 469
longwood, florida


5 posted 12-22-1999 11:28 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

thanks denise..as i've always loved reading your poems!



 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 11-06-1999
Posts 43042
Florida's Foreverly Shores


6 posted 12-22-1999 11:30 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ashley -
Not to worry ... it's good.
Welcome as a poem poster.
I've already enjoyed your comments.
You live just a hop - skip - and jump
away from me.  
Merry Christmas.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


starboards
Member
since 10-14-1999
Posts 469
longwood, florida


7 posted 12-22-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Marge--
  it would appear that we are indeed neighbors! Thanks for replying...merry X-mas to you too...!!!

Ashley

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


8 posted 12-22-1999 11:38 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Starboards hon, you aren't unlucky.  The only unlucky thing for you was that you ever met this jerk!!  Merry Christmas.  

 Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas..
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
Member
since 10-14-1999
Posts 469
longwood, florida


9 posted 12-22-1999 11:42 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Isis--
  actually, believe it or not, this wasnt written for the "jerk" but for some other jerk right before he came along...oh well...what's the difference right? thanx, merry X-mas to you!

Ashley

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
starboards will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #4 >> Unlucky one Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors