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Does She Know?

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Michael
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0 posted 12-21-1999 11:24 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

DOES SHE KNOW

Often, I wonder does she know
I feel it when she cries -
And just how deep it pains me so
I cannot dry her eyes.

Often, I wonder does she feel
Me by her side at night.
Or believe the dream to be real,
When nothing else seems right.

Could a single notion from me
Give warmth from bitter cold -
Bring her a smile for all to see
From a heart of pure gold.

Can the eyes within a picture
Show love to one unseen.
In hers my heart is set astir,
Mi-Lady and my Queen.

I sing her to sleep every night,
In dream I hold her near.
Where gleaming eyes by the twilight
Never again may tear.

Is there more to do, I wonder,
The days, they pass so slow.
I'd give up all to be with her,
Still I wonder, does she know?


Michael Anderson

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starboards
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1 posted 12-21-1999 11:30 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

I hope she knows, Michael! Great job once again! I hope to see more of your poems!

Starboards
    


 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
Tara Simms
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2 posted 12-21-1999 11:39 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Stunning, Michael.  Does she know?  Yes!  I love reading the poems the two of you write for each other.

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


sandgrain
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3 posted 12-21-1999 11:42 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Is there a language beyond words?  You express it so very well.
Denise
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4 posted 12-21-1999 11:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Michael! Yes, she knows!

 Denise


Beri
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5 posted 12-21-1999 11:55 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Beautiful Michael!  And I am certain she knows just how lucky of a woman she is!

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

Severn
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6 posted 12-22-1999 12:32 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

How could she not know with all the love you write for her?

Beautiful, just beautiful.

K
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7 posted 12-22-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Another great one Micheal. Does she know ? I think so ! : )
Merry Christmas to both of you.

Munda
PhaerieChild
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8 posted 12-22-1999 01:18 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Michael, you know in your heart that she knows..  

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



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Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 12-22-1999 05:09 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Beautiful, Michael,
Why don't you send her this poem and melt her heart!
Liz
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10 posted 12-22-1999 02:04 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I would think that even if she didn't know before, she certainly does now. Personally, I think that since she was smart enough to land you, she has known for a long time.

If a woman decides you are hers then you are doomed and your fate is sealed, not that it is such a bad fate with the right woman.  


 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
                                            DreamEvilŠ
-------------------------------------------------------
"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
                        (Marquis de Sade)



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Fairy Colours
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11 posted 12-22-1999 02:11 PM       View Profile for Fairy Colours   Email Fairy Colours   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fairy Colours

I really felt this poem. As well as the others. I had to say awww, out loud a few times.

 --A Little Fairy--
Iloveit
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12 posted 12-22-1999 02:26 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

really beautiful poem Michael...it is hard sometimes as the distance dulls the feelings and make you ache to reach out and pull them close......great job

and ROFG@dream's doomed comment
samsonheart
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13 posted 12-22-1999 03:42 PM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

I could really feel the emotion in this, Michael. Great job on a beautiful poem.

samsonheart
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14 posted 12-22-1999 05:13 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Awww.....Michael - it's just as beautiful as when you read it over the phone!  I love it when you read to me a poem over the phone, and then I get to come here and see it....where I can read it slower....soaking up every word...and sometimes you get that little "frog" in your throat when you read them to me....    So, I just want to say thank you again darling...this is truly beautiful.  And yes, I do know.  I love you.  
(chuckling at DE's humor !)  You know Dream, you're quite the guy!  I knew you'd see it my way eventually!  LOL   ......sigh......he IS mine.    


 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF


Nate Dogg
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15 posted 12-22-1999 05:38 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Good poem Michael. You've explained yourself very well on this one.

 Nathan
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16 posted 12-22-1999 06:16 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Hey sweetie!  I love you...I see you're wandering around in here too, 'eh?  ***kisses  Thank you for this beautiful poem, although I know I already said something along that line....    
 
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