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I'll Be Along (repost for RSEvans)

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Denise
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0 posted 12-21-1999 09:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

I'm lost in thought, again, I see
Another mem'ry calling me
I gently slip into the past
I'll be right back, I'll be real fast.

I linger there...perhaps too long
But can't you hear that lovely song?
How can I leave before it's done?
That soothing strain has just begun.

What's that you say...it's time to go?
There's work to do, of course, I know
You go ahead, I'll be along
I need to hear just one more song...

Another lovely melody
Another mem'ry calling me.




 Denise




[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-21-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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1 posted 12-21-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Oh can I relate to this....like rushing somewhere then sitting in the parking lot to hear just a little more of one on the car radio.  Thanks
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2 posted 12-21-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is beautiful, Denise. Nice melody.
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3 posted 12-21-1999 10:38 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Loved this....Glad you reposted it.  

 Share what you are for you are what you share


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4 posted 12-21-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Here's to those moments that bring a smile to our face. Those moments that we slip back and slow down! Thanks Denise  
Denise
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5 posted 12-21-1999 11:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Sandgrain, Balladeer, First Knight and Rebecca for reading and commenting!  Here's to those memories!!

(pretend you see two champaign glasses clinking together...hehehehehe!!)

 Denise


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6 posted 12-22-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A sweet melody this one was - flows beautifully.  Wonderful read.

michael
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7 posted 12-22-1999 12:48 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Yes - songs bring back those memories, that's for certain.

Another great poem, Denise.

K
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8 posted 12-22-1999 05:21 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Denise,
Good memories do beckon us and hold our attention this way
Very beautifully written
Liz
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9 posted 12-22-1999 11:07 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

We both have lost someone near and dear
And neither dwell in the past I fear
But for this refrain I'll say it clear
Thank You, Denise.  You're such a dear.

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10 posted 12-22-1999 11:11 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Try as I might to focus on your refrain...my mind keeps wandring back again...

;-)

 How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius
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11 posted 12-22-1999 10:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Michael, Severn, Elizabeth, RS and Local Rebel for reading and for your kind comments! You all here at Passions are such a wonderful part of my life!  

 Denise


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wonderful write
thanks for this Denise
Artic Wind
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13 posted 11-12-2007 04:22 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Wonderful
i really enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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