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Artur Hawkwing
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0 posted 12-21-1999 04:18 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Thanks  
But I'm going to delete this one, and see if I can come up with another one that's better. I didn't post it in public because I didn't think it qualified as a good poem.

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Moving this to open #4, where it can recieve more replies and attention.
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Like your picturesque wording.  It really brought feeling.  Thanks
 
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