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Love Changes

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TomS
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0 posted 12-21-1999 08:44 PM       View Profile for TomS   Email TomS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomS

Love Changes

Shall I name the cause of my discontent
As though another loveršs lament
No, it has more depth than that
And was not my intent, in fact

You must realize love is a changing thing
From its great depth, can surface and take wing
Die like unfanned coals
Become wreckage on the sholes

As my love grew, heršs died
Flowed away, me the sand her the tide
The despair I felt was in the knowing
That twas I failed the coals glowing

No, my intent here is to warn
You must look now, donšt wait the morn
Search deep and know your heart
For if you scorn, love will depart
© Copyright 1999 TomS - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 12-21-1999 09:17 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is some good advice, Tom...
sandgrain
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2 posted 12-21-1999 09:35 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

I like that analagy..."me the sand, her the tide",  it really paints an image.  Enjoyed the writing and warning.  Thanks.
Denise
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3 posted 12-21-1999 10:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem...wise words! (ask my ex...hehehehe) Welcome to Passions, Tom. This is the first of yours I have read! I'll be looking for more!

 Denise


starboards
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4 posted 12-21-1999 11:27 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

I wish i would have read this "warning" befor falling in love...for this is the most accurate description of what love can and will do...great poem and well expressed!

        
Starboards
        

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
Severn
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5 posted 12-22-1999 12:41 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very, very nice.

littleJas
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6 posted 12-22-1999 09:00 AM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

I really liked your poem. Its all so true love is so unfair sometimes but then it can be so wonderful
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 12-22-1999 09:06 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Beautiful,
I agree with the sentiment
Liz
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8 posted 12-22-1999 11:12 AM       View Profile for Fairy Colours   Email Fairy Colours   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fairy Colours

Such beautiful, descriptive words. God I wish I could have read this before I fell in love!!! It would have made me think a little bit.

 --A Little Fairy--
TomS
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9 posted 12-22-1999 06:35 PM       View Profile for TomS   Email TomS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomS

This was not meant as prelove training advice.  This was about my ex wife of 20 years.  And it was about how I failed.  Thanks.  
Tom
 
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