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Double Love

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Munda
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0 posted 12-21-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

These are two separate poems, if read from top to bottom, but can be read as
one poem, when read from left to right. Does anybody know what this type
of poetry is called ?

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Double Love


A son and daughter are all mine           A little lass and little lad
a girl so gay, really divine              naughty at times, but never bad
my handsome boy, a vagebond               the cutest two you’ve ever seen
a true brother and sister bond            no-one ever comes in between
Although they fight and shed a tear       I love ‘em dearly from the heart
for their tie I will never fear           nothing can break this love apart
there a smile ! reunited love             a hug so tight and then a kiss
their way home they’ll find like a dove   and their love I need never miss



Munda

© Copyright 1999 Munda - All Rights Reserved
Coegwyr
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1 posted 12-21-1999 06:31 PM       View Profile for Coegwyr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Coegwyr



I know, I know!!!!

It’s called beautiful poetry.


[This message has been edited by Coegwyr (edited 12-21-1999).]
Mike
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2 posted 12-21-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Excellent work Munda...
Prettige Kerstdagen en een Gelukkig Nieuwjear
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 12-21-1999 07:15 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Munda,
First a wonderful poem
Second I've tried it before
but don't know if it has a name.
I finally got to the point of seven different reads.
Up and down, backward and forward.
Top to bottom, bottom to top.
First line third line
second line forth line.
and then the oposite.
First line forth line
third line second line.
And on and on. It's not that it can't be done but for me it lost its fun.
as I said you have a wonderful poem
and experimentation can be fun.
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 12-21-1999 07:32 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Munda ...
I know ... ASK NAN ... she knows I'll bet!
If it doesn't have a name, it should.

I say let's call it a ~Shufflette~
because it looks like shuffling a deck of cards to me.

Whatever it is ... it's lovely.
I just may have to try one of these
one night when the muse wants to
burn the midnight oil.

Thank you for this intriguing scheme.
~*Marge*~





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Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 12-21-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I think it's called "Double Delight"
That's what I got from it, anyway
Lovely poem(s)
Liz
Pepper
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6 posted 12-21-1999 08:05 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I'd call it amazing Munda! Wow, did I love this!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Munda
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7 posted 12-22-1999 01:05 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Coegwyr: Thank you ! : )

Mike: : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) Pretty soon you'll speak as good Dutch as I do. ; )

Sy: Thank you. : ) I haven't tried all that yet. LOL I may some day.

Marge: : ) Why didn't I think of that ! Shufflette ! Perhaps we better not tell Nan, she may turn it into a Workshop topic some day. ; )

Liz: Thank you !

Pepper: HUGS !

Merry Christmas to you all. : )

Ohme
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8 posted 12-22-1999 11:21 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Intriguing, Munda. I have never see such before.


[This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 12-22-1999).]
Isis
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9 posted 12-23-1999 01:12 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Munda you are too clever!!!  Merry Christmas to you and yours  

 Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas..
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


 
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