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Beri
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0 posted 12-21-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beri

The seconds feel like minutes,
Minutes feel like hours,
And hours feel like days --
It just seems to drag on --
Longer and longer.
How long will I have to endure this feeling?
This pain in my heart --
This emptiness in my soul?
The days turn to weeks,
Weeks turn to months,
Months turn to years --
But I still mourn for what could be --
It goes on and on.


 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

© Copyright 1999 Beri - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 12-21-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I don't know the answer but I do know the feeling...I guess for me, laughter helps and you find yourself laughing amongst people here on PIP...just can't be helped, either that or you find yourself crying for someone elses sorrow and then your own seems so minute..

May tomorrow be all that you wish for and more besides!

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


Beri
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2 posted 12-21-1999 07:01 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Yes, Rainbow, you are so right, you do find yourself laughing amongst the members of PIP.  For that I am grateful!  Thanx for the kind words!  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

Denise
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3 posted 12-21-1999 11:30 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great poem, Beri. I enjoyed this very much!  

 Denise


starboards
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4 posted 12-21-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Yes, it does seem like minutes, hours, days, months and even years but once you get over that someone and allow yourself to breathe you shall find happiness once more!

Starboards  

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
Beri
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5 posted 12-21-1999 11:46 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Thanks Denise!
Star, Yes, I agree and I am trying!  Thank you.     And by the way, I love your quote...I'll have to remember that one.

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

sandgrain
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6 posted 12-21-1999 11:50 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Time can seem eternal when it's filled with pain, but things always lighten up when hurts are shared with caring friends.  Once beyond, in retrospect we know nothing lasts forever. Nice poem.
Severn
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7 posted 12-22-1999 12:29 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hard feelings to go through, Beri - and 'm glad you have the power of poetry to express them through - good work.

Michael
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8 posted 12-22-1999 12:32 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well, I hate to say it but as long as you feel it "could" be, you will mourn it.  It will hurt till you let go, which I know is not an easy thing to do by any means.  ((HUGS)) to you.  


Michael
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9 posted 12-22-1999 05:11 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A day can seem like a month when you're in love. You expressed it well
Good poem!
Liz
Beri
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10 posted 12-22-1999 12:17 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Thanks to all of you for your kind words.  Severn, I am glad I have the power of poetry also, Sometimes I dont know what I would do without it!  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

Local Rebel
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11 posted 12-22-1999 12:23 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Sometimes it seems the time stands still and yet again -- it seems like a lifetime ago.  The human condition.

 How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius
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You spoke what's in my heart Beri...
Hugs....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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13 posted 12-22-1999 01:58 PM       View Profile for Fairy Colours   Email Fairy Colours   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fairy Colours

Time does seem to drag on if you're bored out of your mind. I like this because I can relate.

 --A Little Fairy--
Andrew Scott
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14 posted 12-22-1999 04:09 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

I suppose its all a matter of degrees... the depth of your fall is half the distance you must climb.

Note:  A second is officially defined as the duration of 9,192,631,770 oscillations of the radiation emitted by a cesium 133 atom when undergoing hyperfine transition at zero magnetic field.  Oh... and a "jiffy" is considered to be 1/100th of a second.  That's over 900 billion oscillation per jiffy.  Considering that, have ya ever known anybody to really be there in a jiffy?  

[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 12-22-1999).]
Beri
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15 posted 12-22-1999 07:33 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Thanks for the insight Andrew!  Haha, I must say nope, noone has ever been there in a "jiffy!"  Tnanks to all of you.  Oh, and Fairy, glad you can relate!

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

 
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