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High Tide |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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High Tide Twinkling lights on Christmas Trees, Angelic bells and holly leaves, The child expects St. Nicks return, Cinders in the home hearths burn, Wreaths adorn the neighbor’s gates, Again in through the door he’s late, For buying gifts and treats of Date Bread and candy canes. Yes, the Yule Tide seems high, Save that you are not here….. [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Local, Very nice read, make a nice card. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Thanks very much. Kind words on my first post from a Member Emeritus are most flattering. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Thanks very much. Kind words on my first post from a Member Emeritus are most flattering. How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed. Nice work. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I can relate to every aspect of this one, rebel. Especiall the last line. Good job. Michael |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
LR: Hey, get me out of your grate, it's scorching hot in there...*g* and cinders is wearing even more tatters than before...LOL Seriously: Super from you as always..  HUSG Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Thumbs up on this one LR and welcome to the halls of PIP. I understand you to be an acquaintance of our unsavory rebel Toerag... well just be careful who you hang around with in this place... never know what you might catch. Hope to see more. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Oh... just might catch some really good poetry... thanks everyone.. How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
love this....and yep that last line hits perfect for so many of us here....sigh good to see your loss of virginity went so easy  |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
lol crazy server burped so I get to compliment you twice lol....nice poem my friend....and a very warm welcome from me....hugs [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Really enjoyed this LR...Good piece! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
This is pretty. I agree with Seymour though, it would make a nice card --A Little Fairy-- |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There once was a friend of Toerag Rebellion was really his bag He was locally known As a maverick in poem He's now in our Passionate quag!!! .... Welcome, LR... A friend of Toe's is a friend of mine...  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Thank you Nan... I' just busy dialing Hallmark... How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very nice Holiday poem, a lovely verse Keep them coming! Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
That last line is the clincher, all right. *G* See?? I knew you wouldn't stay in spectator mode! *G* And with poems like this, I'm glad you started posting quickly! *G* Welcome!!! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Superb poetry here, and welcome to Passions! Tell that Toerag he'd better be dialing Gateway *LOL*Glad to have you here, LR It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful! Very nice! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I'm laggin here and have to ditto the above, cause it's been said already. Glad to have you here. WELCOME! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
HA! I found your first post! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmmm... *smiling*...thank goodness for Dixie...  |
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