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Life alone

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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 12-20-1999 07:06 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg


Girl you were my best friend.
I wondered how our love could end.
You were special to me.
You helped me see,
life like it should be.
I don't feel so well
because, my heart hurts like hell.
Baby, tell me why you walked away from me
because without you home,
I am forced to go through life alone.
Tell me what I should do know
because living without your love, I don't know how,
I don't know how,
I really don't know how.
Please come back now
because, I can't eat or sleep.
All I do is weep
because, life without you,
gives me the sad blues.


 Nathan
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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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1 posted 12-20-1999 10:40 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I think this would fit nicely into the Open #4 forum. I am moving this one there Nate.
Denise
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2 posted 12-20-1999 11:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, Nate. Well done.

 Denise


myslinky
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3 posted 12-21-1999 01:28 AM       View Profile for myslinky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for myslinky

  Thankyou for sharing your feelings in this great poem.  
Severn
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4 posted 12-21-1999 03:49 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Nathan - this is heartwrenching. Hugs.
Nate Dogg
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5 posted 12-21-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you all for comments! And thanks Whtdove for moving my poem.

 Nathan
passing shadows
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ouch
Artic Wind
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Ouch indeed passing shawdows said

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