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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Dreaming ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 When the sheep are counted one last time, I'll slumber in dreams of you. Covered in your love, no other heart beats so true. The dreams will take me to the glen we know so well. The glen of our dreams, where the two of us will dwell. No need for words spoken, our bodies speak the lines. Your strong masculinity covering me in lost time. When at last my eyes do open, I will wonder if you knew, how I loved you in the glen of dreams, as much as I still do. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, I've never known anyone who had so many different ways of saying the same thing. You are amazing!This is lovely! Liz |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a beautiful dream, Marge, and of course a beautiful poem. Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
This is awesome. Good job, It takes a lot to make me like a love poem because there is usually no originality or difference between them all, but this was good. --A Little Fairy-- |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sweet dreams, Marge! Lovely poem! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I could not have wished for a nicer poem to be written for me and...huh?..not for me?....uh, nice poem, Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My lucky night ... I've been visited by the 'Dream Team' of ~Double Elizabeth's~ again ! Elizabeth, my friend - Thank you. You always have the nicest things to say ... whether writing or responding. Other Elizabeth - I do like dreams ... glad you like this. Fairy Colours - What a delight your words are to this ~love~ poet. Love is the essence of everything we are passionate about. Love can be the simplest and yet the most eloquent topic of which we all speak. I am so glad that you found this one to your liking. Hope you come back for more. Denise - Sweet dreams to you too, my friend. Balladeer - Ah, my sweet Balladeer ... meet you in the glen. Wipe that smile off your face ! The forum is watching ! *giggling* ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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