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DanielMc
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0 posted 12-20-1999 10:17 PM       View Profile for DanielMc   Email DanielMc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DanielMc

Wait  

When we walk through the park,
And talk 'til dark.
I need to know!
If I give you all that I am,
And I hold your precious hand.
If I whisper sweet nothings in your ears,
And wipe away each loving tear.
Will you still make me wait?
'Til our wedding night.

When I get the nerve to say I love you,
And if I always stay true.
I need to know!
If I promise to love you forever,
And leave you never.
Will you still make me wait?
'Til our wedding night.

When we are missing each other,
And decide to be together.
I need to know!
If I was to bring you chocolates and flowers,
And if we stay up talking for hours.
Will you still make me wait?
'Til our wedding night.

When we decide to move,
Cause we have no room.
I need to know!
If I build our house with my bare hands,
And our own plans.
If I do all this.
Will you still make me wait?
'Til our wedding night.
If this is true my dear I must confess,
You must be my lover, my friend, my soulmate.

written by
Daniel McIntosh
For his soulmate
© Copyright 1999 DanielMc - All Rights Reserved
Fairy Colours
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since 12-02-1999
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1 posted 12-20-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Fairy Colours   Email Fairy Colours   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fairy Colours

You are so sweet. I think it would be well worth the wait, no? I wanted to cry.
Does this poem relate to you?

--A Little Fairy--
DanielMc
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2 posted 12-20-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for DanielMc   Email DanielMc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DanielMc

thanks
all my poems are about how I feel
unconscious - was a dream I had
always and forever - is about those special words Ive used but have not used enough
wait - is for my soulmate to figure out
sandgrain
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since 09-21-1999
Posts 3657
Sycamore, IL, USA


3 posted 12-20-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Each line just pulls you to read on, read on.  The ending is beautiful, wish more people felt this way.  Thanks.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


4 posted 12-21-1999 02:33 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Anything about love, I do have to reply!
And waiting is best, it will make it more special on your wedding night. It is a gift that only she can give to you...Welcome to passions!
A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 12-21-1999 02:34 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Anything about love, I do have to reply!
And waiting is best, it will make it more special on your wedding night. It is a gift that only she can give to you...Welcome to passions!


 "Unto every life, A little love must fall!"

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