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DanielMc
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since 1999-12-20
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0 posted 1999-12-20 10:06 PM


Unconscious  

Why do you come to me in such grace
You stand before me in satin and lace
Could this be a glimpse of what may be
I pray next we meet
I'm not asleep

Why do I need to see you each night
Cause we never yell and call each other names or fight
Could we ever be two hearts that beat as one
Well I'm sure you'll say no before I'm done

Why do you come to me each night
But only in my dreams
I'm sure now you know and will agree
That you don't belong in reality
Your just my fantacy

Wtitten For my soulmate
where ever she may be?

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-20 10:27 PM


This is lovely, Dan. I hope you find her soon!

 Denise



Fairy Colours
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 169
Sunrise,Fl,US
2 posted 1999-12-20 10:37 PM


Very beautiful. They always come when you're not looking for them.

--A Little Fairy--

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 1999-12-20 11:03 PM


Lovely, lonely piece.  I'm sure there's a real live, sweet, pure soulmate out there for you.
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