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DanielMc
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0 posted 12-20-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for DanielMc   Email DanielMc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DanielMc

Unconscious  

Why do you come to me in such grace
You stand before me in satin and lace
Could this be a glimpse of what may be
I pray next we meet
I'm not asleep

Why do I need to see you each night
Cause we never yell and call each other names or fight
Could we ever be two hearts that beat as one
Well I'm sure you'll say no before I'm done

Why do you come to me each night
But only in my dreams
I'm sure now you know and will agree
That you don't belong in reality
Your just my fantacy

Wtitten For my soulmate
where ever she may be?
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Denise
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This is lovely, Dan. I hope you find her soon!

 Denise


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Very beautiful. They always come when you're not looking for them.

--A Little Fairy--
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Lovely, lonely piece.  I'm sure there's a real live, sweet, pure soulmate out there for you.
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