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Unmeasured distance |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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Our friendship unmeasured by the strife of ................................distance your voice melted my darkness and words true became precious by the ringing of your tones …I succumbed to trusting… ~ I am not an easy catch of trust ~ I have seen through discoloured eyes and tasted lies sharp and ruining tentatively given to a myriad bright angels false And there you were my friend holding me voicely as I bled through those lines I felt your hug in the warmed air around and saw your smile through the laugh of your lilt our world of huge separation is sole geography and joy lives in ignorance of all but the hush inside I have already flown there no longer than a breath of care and I stood outside your heart and was welcomed ~safely~ 21.12.99 ~*~*~ For Lizzy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
My dear Kamly, Your poem brought tears to my eyes How beautifully your heart replies I have no words the thank you, dear Except to say that you are near Near to the hearts of the poets all And I'll be waiting for your call And if you need a poet some day We are all just a little phone call away Thank you, dear friend. You're an angel! Love ya, Liz |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
How cute you guys!!! --A Little Fairy-- |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Kamla! She does have a lovely lilt to her voice, doesn't she?!  A lovely tribute to a lovely person from another lovely person! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is nothing as precious as friendship found.....beautiful |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So sweet and true and beautiful! |
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andy Junior Member
since 1999-12-16
Posts 17 |
A magnificent poem at the least. Just beautiful  Merry Christmas ! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Good friends are truly rare, so keep those special ones close to your heart...beautifully written! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little One - Your writing just gets better and better and better. This is lovely ... for a lovely lady. Bless you for your kindness and your great big heart. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Kamla what a lovely poem. And friendship overcomes distance. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is beautiful, reminded me of all the times my best friend and I comforted each other on the phone when we couldn't be together due to geography. Wonderful! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
A skillful tribute to a skillful poet! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A beautiful poem! There is so much feeling here, it's amazing!  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Oh, beautiful beautiful poem, Severn. God bless you and Izzy. Michael |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
I agree with everyone, simply beautiful samsonheart |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I just noticed, I made a typo and called you Kamly. That's alright, Michael called me Izzy! Love ya, Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely beautiful...free verse at it's finest!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Severn. . . I really like the formatting too. . . it really helps convey that idea of "distance". . . so many people don't realize that poems can be works of art without being read. . . Elizabeth, you must be touched. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Thankyou very much everyone, your words mean so much to me. And without my friend Lizzy it wouldn't have been written. - Dearest Lizzy you left me in a tizzy when you called me Kamly and look at me being rhymy! LOL My friend - you were a saviour that day. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Kamla...I will echo all above and add that this is one of the most beautiful tribute poem of love for a friend that I've ever read....I could feel that love so strongly while reading.....most wonderful piece! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Friendship is a gift of life. You give your life to us each time you write Severn, and you do it so well. Straight from the heart. B Gravitt |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Kamla, what a magnificent piece of art!!! Pure LOVE, my friend!!! mcestrada |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Fantastique, my dear...now no more arguments...this is all the evidence I've ever needed that you ARE the BEST! This is so, so, so beautiful. There is nothing like friendship, is there It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Fantastic poem Severn, keep it up! Nathan |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
beautiful, really loved this |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, You have polished a gem here, And it will last forever and a year. *L* Sy |
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Marta Junior Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 18 |
Delicate and simple, almost like a feather and faraway friendhip. Very touching. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I bring this back to the top as my word can hardly do it justice Saving the finest from the end Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Kamla, this is beautiful, beautiful and beautiful!!!. I echo all of the above, especially Pepper. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh wow guys, I am now totally overwhelmed and  ing!Thankyou my friends... I couldn't possibly reply to you all for the post would go on and on...! (Caroline - you can't win - you are Mistress Best!) (And FKnight - I owe you thanks for another rescuing it seems. ) K |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
sorry had to add my reply haven't been around for a while so have a bit of catching up to do! (And no you don't have to reply to the reply but it definately needs to be up the top!). Well even as i read it i knew who it was for so you captured Liz very well! As usual, another excellent work of art from the famous Kamla! Hope you had a good christmas sweetie. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Murray (sp?!) you are a sweetie... |
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