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TomS
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0 posted 1999-12-20 09:15 PM


Hey, I Saw Your Ad

I think we chatted a few months ago
Oh, you don¹t remember
Sorry, but I am sure we met before
Back about September

I told you all about myself
I remember so well your eyes
Why can¹t you remember me
I was not in a disguise

We were supposed to meet again
After we talked that day
About our love of waterfalls
To let happen what may

Don¹t you remember me my dear?
We spoke of fast moving streams
I know them all in these parts
Been thinking of you in my dreams

Oh, sorry my love
I guess I was mistaken
It was not you I met
Must have been my imagination

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TomS
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since 1999-12-18
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1 posted 1999-12-20 09:26 PM


No wonder she forgot me, haha.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 1999-12-20 09:47 PM


TomS -

I like honest emotions ...
this seems to be full of them.
Gosh ... if not ... great 'imagination'.

~*Marge*~


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Denise
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3 posted 1999-12-21 11:59 PM


This is cute, Tom! I enjoyed this much!  

 Denise



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