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Kevin
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0 posted 12-20-1999 08:25 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Elusive as your yesterday
you search for fallen heart.
Question things that you could say
That wouldn't rip apart,
this soul you've left out on the line
in hopes to find a light.
A single ray of love divine
to last you through the night.
Some days tomorrow seems so vile
you want to end it all.
The road of life with one last mile
your engine starts to stall.
you lie awake at night in tears
and scream into your mind,
with nothing but the lonely years
and dreams you left behind.
Sleep leads you on hour after hour
but doesnít let you rest,
just lets you think yourself to sour
of things that you detest.
The memories you can not bare
to replay in your head
are all thatís left for you to share
while lying in your bed.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
amandafoose
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1 posted 12-20-1999 08:31 PM       View Profile for amandafoose   Email amandafoose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amandafoose

this is so good! i cant believe you dont have like twenty million replies for this
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2 posted 12-20-1999 10:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, Kevin.  

 Denise


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 12-20-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kevin -

As usual ... this is hauntingly lovely.
You write with much maturity and wisdom.
Your heart shows in each piece.
Hope you are smiling in your sleep.
Love ~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kevin
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4 posted 12-21-1999 01:10 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

smiling in sleep yes
when i wake up....
thanks marge
RainbowGirl
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5 posted 12-21-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Kevin:  Thankfully, sleep nourishes and so we wake up to a new day before sleeping our way to peace, once more

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


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This is so sad Kev  
 
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