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amandafoose
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0 posted 12-20-1999 07:45 PM       View Profile for amandafoose   Email amandafoose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amandafoose


Turn your head from the innocent
And close your eyes with shame
Take away your goals and dreams
And replace it with your pain

Give in to the hopeless
The forgotten and ashamed
Open up and swallow
Your life will never be the same
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This is very intense. I enjoyed this very much!

 Denise


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