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Let Me Be Heard!

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JOY 14
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0 posted 12-20-1999 05:27 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

I just want to shout
At the top of my lungs
From the rooftop of the highest building
In New York City

I want all to hear my cries
So that I can be relieved of this heaviness
Located in the bottem left corner of my heart

I just want to shout
Until my throat is raw
To get a simple message across
That if I hurt this  deep within
Others must be clawing at the mountain in vain

Under silence my voice is expressed
But I must shout, cry out, in distress!
Let me be heard
Help me!
I give you my bellowing words!

 JOY

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1 posted 12-20-1999 05:38 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Powerful! I like this!
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2 posted 12-20-1999 05:48 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is excellent, displaying many emotions....hurt, pain, frustration, anger, etc. Well written.
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Yes, very emotional and powerful. Well done!

 Denise


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