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RobertB
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0 posted 1999-12-20 05:04 PM


Tides

Life in the pools
left from waters
receding
hopes not in
present confines
with limitations bordered
in sand…
nor believes on
rumors told
from ignorance learned…
but trusts only
on promises
of tides returning.


Robert


 if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-12-20 05:45 PM


Well, there's no going back, Robert, except for those of us that turn into scum  
RobertB
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2 posted 1999-12-20 07:27 PM


} Balladeer

not sure I follow you...or sure you follow me!!!  lol

Robert

Nan
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3 posted 1999-12-20 08:57 PM


and they do always return....
Balladeer
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4 posted 1999-12-20 09:06 PM


hehe. The world is filled with things over my head. I guess your poem just got added to the list. Anyway, I will think it means what I think it means and consider it a great work. It's probably a great work meaning what you created it to mean but, since I'm not sure what that means, I will fill it with meaning meant for my mean brain of no little means.
Denise
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5 posted 1999-12-20 10:05 PM


Ah, yes! I like this very much! And like Balladeer, I know what it means to me, but I think I know what you meant, but I'm not telling you, 'cause whenever I do that I'm wrong! hehehehehe  

 Denise



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7 posted 2007-11-12 06:50 PM


Very much enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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