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Is It True? Can It Be?

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Mark R.
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0 posted 12-20-1999 03:28 PM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mark R.


Is it true,
That my every breath draws from you.
Can it be,
That your beautiful smile is all I ever wish to see.

Can you deny,
That to your every whimper, I would reply.
Can you confess,
That it's because of you, I find my heart in complete duress.

Is it true,
That I wish to be with you through and through.
Can it be,
That it's your warm embrace I wish to feel around me.

Can you deny,
That whatever you ask of me, I never ask you how or why.
Can you confess,
That you're aware, I can't live without your soft caress.

So tell me,
Is it true?  Can it be?
That what I long for is within you and me.
© Copyright 1999 Mark R. - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 12-20-1999 03:31 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Oh, my! Lovely poem..simply lovely! I like this a lot!  
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 12-20-1999 04:03 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

"Into the heart of every man, the soul speaks through his poetry...yours spoke well to my soul"  

Very romantic and beautiful!


 "Unto every life, A little love must fall!"

Andrew Scott
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3 posted 12-20-1999 04:14 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Been gone for about a week and there is so much to catch up on, but I must say that as my first read back yours was a pleasure.  I like the style, which is different from most here in PIP and I just enjoyed it overall.  Thanks for shaing.
Mark R.
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4 posted 12-26-1999 08:55 PM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark R.

Thank you everyone.  I, myself, have been gone for over a month, and to be able to come back, write something and get such a response as I have is nothing less than wonderful.  You all have my greatest of gratitude.  Thank you again, and have an spectacular new year....
Denise
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5 posted 12-26-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, I agree, this is beautiful, Mark!  

 Denise


jascanvey
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6 posted 12-27-1999 05:30 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

A lovely poem.
Oh, to find a man who feels so much.....!!!
passing shadows
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7 posted 04-15-2005 03:03 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

glad I found this back here in the archives
Artic Wind
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8 posted 11-12-2007 04:13 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

This is so beautiful

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