Your world is decay...embrace it

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Open Poetry #4

Your world is decay...embrace it

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-12-20 01:33 PM

ill be one of the ones
not allowed to stay
and ill be difficult
a pinpoint of decay
just so you can see my anger
in the spotlight now
faltering mind leaving me far behind
and i got a new risk to take..
a better heart to break
to hell with your world
because they have sent me there too..
to rot away with the most distant
parts of you..

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-12-20 02:30 PM

I sense bitterness in this poem, what is troubling you??

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

2 posted 1999-12-20 02:33 PM

very many things...

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

3 posted 1999-12-20 05:11 PM

The last lines, very intriguing
...to rot away with the most distant parts of you

JOY

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