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Your world is decay...embrace it

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The Jackal
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0 posted 12-20-1999 01:33 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

ill be one of the ones
not allowed to stay
and ill be difficult
a pinpoint of decay
just so you can see my anger
in the spotlight now
faltering mind leaving me far behind
and i got a new risk to take..
a better heart to break
to hell with your world
because they have sent me there too..
to rot away with the most distant
parts of you..

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1 posted 12-20-1999 02:30 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

I sense bitterness in this poem, what is troubling you??
The Jackal
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2 posted 12-20-1999 02:33 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Jackal

very many things...
JOY 14
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3 posted 12-20-1999 05:11 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

The last lines, very intriguing
...to rot away with the most distant parts of you



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