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in memory of my heart
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in memory of my heart |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
your angry words lashed out, unfairly punctuated by your open hand and it wouldn't have been the first time nor even the next but ultimately a piece of me died I buried it painstakingly. with each new piece I carved another letter on the gravestone "in memory of my heart" and now this day, my eyes look at your hands clenched in frustration, your arms hanging weakly at your sides and I smile with sad satisfaction for my heart is buried safely just out of reach. remember this...nobody has an unbreakable heart |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So very sad.....Big Hugs to you Iloveit...... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: Ouch!!!...Sounds like it's teatime with HT ....yes? Big HUSG Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks pepper....sending hugs back and yep rg.....its one of those "iloveit writes sad poem days"......tea would be nice.....you pick the place....*smile* anywhere but here...... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
ok, how about an early supper @ the Savoy...say about 7pm?...No need to dress for it...ooops, well, I mean dress but not dress...hmmm...you know what I mean... HUSG< !signature--> Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-20-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
what a commentary on men....lol....when the doorman losing his heel is the memory that makes you smile.....lol....thanks for the smiles....can just see you giggling  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such incredible sadness written so beautifully!!! That heart is simply resting, dear friend... waiting for someone who will appreciate its beauty and treat it as the treasure it is! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks my friend....sigh....you think? maybe I should hand out shovels...lol....with my memory, I will forget where I buried it... hugs |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"I carved another letter on the gravestone "in memory of my heart" Oh wonderful lines...but my dear friend...you have much to big of a heart to bury anywhere |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
I agree with hoot ... and your heart is too precious to be buried ... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I have felt this way many times. I can truly relate to your pain...((HUGS)) Hopefully, one day your heart with find new life as mine has - it get's real rough trying to live without one after awhile. Michael |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Tragic torment expressed so beautifully Great poem Liz |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Iloveit...This is a great poem but it sounds like your going through a hard time....i think buring your heart is just a temporary fix...the pain will unevitable come back if you dont let go of it...great job!! "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
And with each peice she planted there, There grew a rose so very fair.... |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
peice ?? ... hey I'm supposed to be the French guy here ! ... or are you deliberately leaving typos for Lovey to pick up ? *g* |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks hoot and JTF at least I can say it is a heart with really good friends Michael thanks for the hugs…..and yep you are right its rough without one (hugs back) Elizabeth and starboards….thank you much…. Local Rebel sigh….it sure does my heart good to see you here….and thank you for saying something so sweet…. and ROFG@typo....nope I saw it first...lol but the sweet comment about roses got to me....lol, you know roses go before typo's in my book anyday ROFG [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wishing that you will find the one that will raise your heart from the dead. . . a dead heart knows nothing, feels nothing. . . Your heart has not yet died my friend. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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