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Iloveit
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0 posted 12-20-1999 09:45 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

just because
I smile when you come' round
and I never fail to tell you
you are the cutest thing in town
and yes, I know its obvious
how much I really care,
you needn't feel you must remind me
that we are…
just friends.
I am absolutely aware
that I
am not
your everything…



[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-20-1999).]
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 12-20-1999 09:53 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Unrequited love...oh how sad  
Pepper
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2 posted 12-20-1999 11:14 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Ouch...been there too, K....it hurts!!....


 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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Iloveit
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3 posted 12-20-1999 11:32 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well it doesn't hurt as much as it makes me mad....I never asked for more....am happy with what we have....just wanna kick him when he thinks I need reminding lolol....and you know somehow it helps...just to post the anger...am feeling a bit better....well that and that I sent it to him too *g*

thanks you two  
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 12-20-1999 11:40 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Hey, hope you added one massive kick from me as well, enough to send him hopping for cover...stupid man!!!

Big HUSG

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


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5 posted 12-20-1999 12:10 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Three cheers for sending it! *G*

You may have written it from anger... but it resonates with sadness... or maybe it's just that I can relate. *S* Well done!
Iloveit
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6 posted 12-20-1999 12:35 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

lol@hopping for cover *grin* nope didn't send a kick from you.....but I can if you want lol

and suthern, I know...'bout the sadness thing, but....such is life....sigh...thanks
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7 posted 12-20-1999 03:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is not something that should happen to a person as nice as you are, lovey. He should accept your feelings and feel lucky.
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8 posted 12-21-1999 08:50 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

He is the cutest thing in town ? ... huh, you mean bar me ?? ...  

Very well written ..  
Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 12-21-1999 09:19 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

He is so very very cute
To sentiments it seems he's mute
I like how you jumped out the rut
And kicked his cute little butt
Liz
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10 posted 12-21-1999 12:09 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Well,

He did say himself he needs his ass kicked upon occasion
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11 posted 12-21-1999 12:16 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Local Rebel: And he was right! LOL. WELCOME, feathered one!!!
Iloveit
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12 posted 12-21-1999 12:37 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

Balladeer what a sweet thing to say...sometimes though it does a person good to get mad and stick up for ones self...hugs
JTF lolol as cute as you are....gonna have to give him first place....*g*
Elizabeth lol very cute poem thanks  
LR well gee, you didn't tell me I could do it in poetry form.....woulda kicked it for you long ago....lol....hugs and more hugs
suthern *big big smiles*

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-21-1999).]
RSEvans
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13 posted 12-21-1999 02:00 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

In refrain I quote to him,
Undeserving son of sin,
How dare you ignore that which blooms
In Iloveit's pantaloons!

Sad to see such heartfelt emotion wasted on such heartless persons....  
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14 posted 12-21-1999 02:18 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

It's damn hard to ignore when she isn't wearing any....

Iloveit
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15 posted 12-21-1999 02:23 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

ROFG@not wearing any.....ROFG.....shhhhhhh LR you two are going to have everyone wondering about my pantaloons ...   or lack thereof lolol

RS....thank you for the sentiment...but no...not heartless at all, he makes me feel alive....sigh...it does me good to get mad once in a while, shakes me out of my "I wish" world and into enjoying the smiles in reality....thanks ROFG@Iloveit's pantaloons  

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-21-1999).]
Nate Dogg
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16 posted 12-21-1999 06:46 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Good job lloveit! This poem is unique! And that's how some people are for real.

 Nathan
 
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