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Lightning and Thunder |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Lightning and Thunder ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Do not give me a calm quiet love for I could find serenity in a church. Give me a taste of thunder that lingers long after the lightning is gone. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah - Donner Und Blitzen.... I do like this extended metaphor.... lots...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Why thank you, Nan. I love your comments always. Have a wonderful day. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whoooo Hoooo...............I do like this one |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yep! I agree! Liked this much Marge.......A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, That's what I've heard before But in which I take little store. *L* Sy PS. great poem. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Marge, great poem, i liked the first verse alot!!! keep it up!! Starboards |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Marge, I like your style. Loved this. It brought on a smile and a tingling sensation. -RS < !signature--> There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix [This message has been edited by FreeByrd (edited 12-20-1999).] |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
I liked this one alot, simple and powerful. There are so many great poets here! I am amazed and quite humbled. samsonheart |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, That's my girl! Short and powerful! Liz |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, girl, I'll give you a blizzard Guaranteed to freeze your gizzard. I'll give you a huge whirlwind Meant to keep you in a spin. I'll give you a hurricane, Blow until you've gone insane. Give a Japanese Tsunami Till you cry out for your mommy. I'll give you a large earthquake, Smile each time I see you shake. I'll give you a big cyclone, Listen closely as you moan. Tornados, too, I'll give to you Spin you 'round till you turn blue. I'll give to you a grand typhoon Just to hear you while you swoon. Though storm clouds may hang overhead And skies may wear a tinge of red, You can be sure, until the end, I'll be your fair-weather friend. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, this was great! I loved it and I know just what you mean. Storms are so exciting! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot - Thanks,luv. I always appreciate your comments. Pepper - U2 ... I thank you. Seymour - Believe it ... it's gospel ! StarBoards - Thank you and thanks for the read. I'll do my darndest to keep it up. FreeByrd - I sure appreciate your appreciation. The tingling sensation tickles me ... you've just been ZAPPED ! (by lightning perhaps?) SamsonHeart - - So glad you are enjoying your friends here at Passions. Yes, there is a lot of talent here ... yours adds to it. Welcome to our friendship circle. Elizabeth, my friend - Thanks hon. It just ~struck~ me ! Tee Hee ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Martie, I implore you! Don't take it personally, just because Marge ignored us completely out of all who responded. I know it makes you angry to feel sleighted in this manner but I'm sure there's a good reason for it....like maybe we're at the bottom of the food chain or something. Cheer up, Martie. Someone will appreciate us some day, I'm sure. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Marge! Yours too, Balladeer! She'll be back with a great answer for ya I'm sure! Denise |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie - Thank you so much for liking this. It's so nice to hear from you. I'm sorry I missed you the first time around ... we must have been posting at the same time or something like that. I DO APPRECIATE YOU ! Denise - Such a sweetheart you are. Always appreciate hearing from you. I DO APPRECIATE YOU TOO! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer - I ask for thunder ..... YOU give me a freaking weather report of cataclysmic proportion !  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Awesome, impacting poem... and ROTFLMAO at you and 'deer! K |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
WOW!!!!!..  I can feel the force in this one......PASSION OUT OF CONTROL.....hehe Love this one Marge Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Severn - Thanks, little one. Always love a response from you. Balladeer the weather man? LMOT ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
First_Knight - May the 'force' be with you ! *grinning* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
hmmmm?....sometimes lightning strikes twice......come have a peek at my lightning rod dearie!!!....Nice poem gal... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Toerag - *giggling* Balladeer ... have you seen Toe's lightning rod? If lightning strikes twice ... we're in BIG trouble ! ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
You guys are too much. This was a very pretty poem. I agree with it too. --A Little Fairy-- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks Fairy Colours. We 'guys' are funny alright. I'm the one in the middle WITHOUT a lightning rod !    *Giggle* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, you kidding? TOE hasn't seen Toe's lightning rod for years! I mean, aren't lightning rods supposed to stand up? I, on the other hand, have been vane most of my life! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
ROFL@Toe's lightning rod.... Marge -- Simplicity is beauty... you are beautiful! How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer ! Thank God you're here ! Just heard a flash on the news, a cure for lightning rod abuse. They said just dip it in viagra dilute and it would stand at full salute. I'm not sure I understand, but maybe you'll tell Toe. Then instead of flagging he could run it up the pole. Well, what do I know ? This L'Oreal blonde gets the nod. I think I'll quit while I'm ahead and not worry about lightning rods. *giggling ~blondely~*< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, Any response I have to your poem Would get me spanked and sent back home. Just let Toe stay upon the roof. If lightning strikes him, we'll have proof! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 yes! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love your poems ARCTIC WIND |
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