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Lost Dreamer
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Gentle

Gentle awakening sunrise
tiptoeing in the reflective glow
of rippling river tides.

Gentle starry morning kiss
planted upon sleepy eyes
opening to meet a new day.

Gentle warming of sands
creating a cushion of harmony
for the treasures of the day to unfold.

Gentle wind swept vapors
caressing smiling faces
strolling through their serene universe.

Gentle evening sunset
dancing slowly over land
as the moon grasps the evening glow.

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1 posted 12-20-1999 07:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lost Dreamer -

Thank you for this lovely
morning eye-opener.
Enough beautiful imagery
to get me through the day.
~*Marge*~


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This is very lovely  
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Beautifully imagery...Lovely poem LD...!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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Marge,Ruth, & Pepper thank you all very much, this poem was inspired as I looked out the train window and saw the sun rising over a body of water. I felt it looked so beautiful at that moment, so that led me to share it's beauty with all of you here. Glad you enjoyed it as much as I did.
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Lost Dreamer,
You have a good palatte and use it well.
Enjoyed
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Very soothing and expressive, I like this one!
Nan
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Nice to see you posting, LD - You've had enough of a break here..
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Lost Dreamer, I loved the imagery here.  Very nice poem.

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Very beautiful, Dreamer.
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Thanks for sharing this with us, Gloria, it is beautiful!

 Denise


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