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My Sun

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First__Knight
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0 posted 12-20-1999 06:40 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight

My Sun
~First Knight~


She came into my life,
while living out my days.
So beautiful I saw her,
I can not count the ways.

I watched her every move,
Every word she ever spoke.
She held my every wish,
Feelings she provoked.

She didn't even know me,
I could not make a sound.
Amazed at her beauty,
My true love I have found.

I saw her beauty well,
She gave only from the heart.
Her soft and tender touch,
My love will not depart.

Days passed by so quickly,
As time was not the same.
Hours seemed like moments
Into my life she came.

Words she spoke to me,
Things I longed to hear,
Gentle words she spoke,
"What's your name sweet dear?"

My days are heaven filled now,
She's my life, my soul, my air.
She shares with me her day,
My heart trapped in her snare.



 Share what you are for you are what you share


© Copyright 1999 First__Knight - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 12-20-1999 06:47 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Breathtaking words you have here, FKnight.

K

Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 12-20-1999 07:02 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Your glowing from the suns rays reflecting off your beautifully written words. I am sure your intended recipient of this poem will be glowing in happiness as well. I really enjoyed, thanks for sharing.
Marilyn
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3 posted 12-20-1999 09:18 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Lovely verse Sir Knight. You have to be careful when making someone your sun and your life. that comes with time and experience. These feelings are wonderful but be careful about letting them consume you.

Just a skeptic's point of view...lol
Poet deVine
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4 posted 12-20-1999 09:57 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful poem!  
WhtDove
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5 posted 12-20-1999 10:25 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What a beautiful poem! Make any heart melt!
Pepper
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6 posted 12-20-1999 11:25 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

(sigh)...Very romantic...so beautiful..
Liked this much Sir...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 12-20-1999 11:44 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

David...this is a beautiful poem, very heartfelt and touching. I am really at a loss for words.
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 12-20-1999 11:48 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Knight: This brings a smile to my face..

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


Nate Dogg
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9 posted 12-20-1999 06:40 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Nice poem First Knight! I liked the last line.

 Nathan
samsonheart
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10 posted 12-20-1999 07:26 PM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

First Knight, I really enjoyed this poem and you expressed your feelings with elegance.  

samsonheart
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 12-20-1999 07:30 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

First Knight
I hope this poem is true! I assume it is. If so, it's a beautiful love. Congratulations. Many happy days ahead!
Liz
Tara Simms
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12 posted 12-20-1999 08:50 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

"Hours seemed like moments" I loved this line.  I know well the feeling of time being suspended.  Amazing isn't it?  Beautiful poem!

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 12-20-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

David,
    I don't feel my above post did your poem justice, so I had to reply again. In addition, I have also responded with a posted poem of my own called "Please Remember."
Hugs  
Ruth

He came into my world
A light in midst of dark
His warm and caring soul
Started a fine spark

I watched his kind relpies
His words in poetry
And very soon I realized
He was writing them to me

It frightened me at first
His emotions felt so strong
I felt I barely knew him
We hadn't talked for long

But I promise I will try
To keep an open mind
Perhaps someday in him
My true love I will find

sandgrain
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14 posted 12-20-1999 10:35 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Really enjoyed your writing...all I can say is amen to all foresaid comments.
Fairy Colours
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15 posted 12-20-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for Fairy Colours   Email Fairy Colours   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fairy Colours

Beautiful poem. I wish I could be so lucky to have a person think of me like this.
A Romantic Heart
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16 posted 12-21-1999 02:20 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

A romantic and beautiful piece, I could tell it was written from your heart!

 "Unto every life, A little love must fall!"

First__Knight
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17 posted 12-21-1999 05:56 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

My computer is crashed so it has been far to long in replys.  I wish to thank you all for the wonderful comments that each of you have left here for me.  If I thank each of you this post would be so long that it would need more server space......hehe  

Ruth being special I say to you,

I will never be anything less than what you see.......nor will I be anything more without your full and given time of choice.  I posted a reply to your poem "Please Remember"   It was a lovely poem


 Share what you are for you are what you share




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