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What I Wish Tonight

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Jordan Lake
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0 posted 12-20-1999 05:11 AM       View Profile for Jordan Lake   Email Jordan Lake   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jordan Lake

What I Wish Tonight...

I wish to describe a scene...
A scene where beauty
gleams,
I wish to converse with the
likes of you, amongst the drops
of morning dew,
I wish to love, to hold,
to ask of you...
the questions of which you only
knew.
How does it feel to love so sweet?
Does your heart pound,
in measured beats, or does it skip
with infinite leaps?
I wish to know from within your
heart, to gather knowledge
and never part.

What gift God has given me!

To speak so clear and ever so free,
to express what
once was a jumbled mess, pouring
forth an idiotic press,
How can I fail in my honored quest? To
love you, to hold you, to pass
your gallant test?
What words shall you give, to
cherish this night? I give you
my dreams, to hold with might,
I hope to hear from you this
night, to hear the
bliss of a lovers light.
This is what I wish tonight.


Jordan Lake
1999



 
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1 posted 12-20-1999 06:09 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nicely done, Jordon.
~*Marge*~


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Lovely wishes, Jordan!  

 Denise


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very nice poem     please look over my poem and reply to it even if its bad
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