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Felt So Alive

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samsonheart
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0 posted 12-20-1999 01:42 AM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

I felt so alive that day
I canít hide the fact that Iíve fallen for you
For very much longer anyway
You see my heart is very tender
It was actually ripped to pieces once,
I just stood there, looking down at the tattered remains
wondering if Iíd ever be the same, and now I know.
Of course I know....because of you....
I felt so alive that day
My heart had found a way to heal itself
You didnít know it at the time
At the time you were so unaware that you were the reason
I felt so alive
You just smiled,
And I smiled inside.

© Copyright 1999 samsonheart - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 12-20-1999 03:11 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

WELCOME!!!

          

And a very tender piece indeed.
First__Knight
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2 posted 12-20-1999 04:34 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Heartfelt work here. I understand what you meant in every word    Thank you for sharing and welcome

 Share what you are for you are what you share


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 12-20-1999 06:12 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Very pretty work.
~*Marge*~


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Poet deVine
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4 posted 12-20-1999 07:40 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you.
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5 posted 12-20-1999 08:06 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I enjoyed! Welcome to Passions!  
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 12-20-1999 10:01 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely written...welcome to passions  
Dolphins3
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7 posted 12-20-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Samson Welcome to passions. I loved your first post.  
mc
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8 posted 12-20-1999 12:47 PM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

Beautiful !!

 mcestrada
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 12-20-1999 12:52 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Samsonheart,
Enjoyed and welcome.
Irie
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10 posted 12-20-1999 01:31 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

It seems you have taken this right out of my heart. Great work! Look forward to seeing more from you
Thank you  
A Romantic Heart
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11 posted 12-20-1999 02:01 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This poem is sad but yet beautiful, for hope is still there and love can be born again. I understand your heart being cut to pieces...I have been there and done that!

Welcome to passions!
starboards
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12 posted 12-20-1999 02:04 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

while reading this i pictured you looking down at your torn heart, great expressions!

Starboards
samsonheart
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13 posted 12-20-1999 03:57 PM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

Thank you very much everyone! Your comments build my confidence and just made my day!
-Samsonheart
Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 12-20-1999 04:27 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Welcome to Passions, and with a heart in love, we should be getting more little gems like this from you,
Liz
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15 posted 12-20-1999 04:52 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Beautiful words my friend. . . I too have been in love, so your words speak to me. . .

Your name is quite interesting. . . the heart of samson. . . I like it. . .

Welcome to Passions. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


samsonheart
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16 posted 12-20-1999 07:23 PM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

Thank you Elizabeth and Sven, your compliments are taken to heart.

-samsonheart
caroline
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17 posted 12-20-1999 07:27 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Nice entrance you make! This is lovely, very heartfelt. Welcome...I'll be looking forward to more of your poetry  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


 
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