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How can I love somebody else...

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Master
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0 posted 12-19-1999 10:25 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

How can I love somebody else but thee,
Whose image is reflected in my cup?
For even when my eyes refuse to see,
My dreams displaying thee will never stop!
How can I live abreast of my desire,
And hear that heartbeat echo as my own?
When from within, there burns a sacred fire,
How can I love and be as cold as stone?
Oh, lengthy hours, teach me to ignore,
So I may look upon him with no feeling,
So I may gaze into my cup and not adore
The beauty of the man whos so appealing.
How must I live against myself opposed?
Consume my pride?Oh, Ill be overdosed!



 I fell in love and kept on falling

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 12-20-1999 07:43 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Keep those sonnets comin' Master...
trochaic "ing" words and all....
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 12-20-1999 10:19 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very Nice  
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 12-20-1999 11:54 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Master: You're truly becoming a Master..

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 12-20-1999 01:39 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Master,
That's about as good as you can say it.
Enjoyed the read.
Sven
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5 posted 12-20-1999 01:50 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Your name fits you my friend. . .

Excellent work!

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


starboards
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6 posted 12-20-1999 02:14 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

It takes alot to be able to write sonnets, and you seem to have all the qualifications...nice work.

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
Master
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7 posted 12-20-1999 07:31 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I thank you all for the support and kind responses!
Denise
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8 posted 12-20-1999 09:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Master, this took my breath away! 'ings' and all! Absolutely beautiful! You seem to be getting very good at the iambic pentameter!


 Denise


Master
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9 posted 12-20-1999 09:39 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

You mean I got it this time? Wow, sometimes I amaze myself!
Denise
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You got the meter down pat! Excellent!  

 Denise


Master
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Thank you Denise!
Denise
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Had to bring this back up...it is so beautiful!  

 Denise


 
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