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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-12-19 09:52 PM




You
With your gentle words
Bring me to want you more.

When you sing
It makes my body melt
You seem so perfect.

Sometimes
I wonder if you're here
Or a figment of my imagination.

Your dark hair
and soft eyes
are all that I could ever want.

But
I know the possibility is low
For we're not each others type.

Although
Every time I see you
I want to be with you more than ever.

But at least
You still flirt with me
And I'll always flirt back.


 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-12-19 09:56 PM


This is lovely, Lynn! I enjoyed this!  

 Denise



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2 posted 1999-12-19 10:18 PM


I like this one, Lynn! Good work.
Lynn
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3 posted 1999-12-20 01:48 AM



Thank you both. I've just met a new guy, and he seems so woderful. He flirts with me a lot, and I hope we get together, despite our social status.

 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 1999-12-20 02:19 AM


Don't leave any words unspoken!
Good luck!
This is lovely
Liz

Severn
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5 posted 1999-12-20 06:38 AM


Good luck!

Nice poem...  K

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6 posted 1999-12-20 08:27 AM


I like this, Lynn! Enjoy!  
Lynn
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7 posted 1999-12-20 03:59 PM



Thank you for the nice comments.
And Liz, I don't expect to...


 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

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