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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-12-19 09:17 PM


For some time now she's been here
laughing time spent really well
the spark of hope's returning
a story she hopes he'll one day tell

Lending a shoulder to cry on
giving hugs when he was sad
now he's learnt what's precious
under his nose was what he had

She shared his joy and his fun
and saw his chin stayed high
now his once half empty heart
echoes a more peaceful sigh

This angel's work is done
as she backs away with pride
but has a longing feeling
tucked way down deep inside

For angel's rules are very clear
you give your best then fly
if angel's get their hearts involved
you'll hear an angel cry

Angel's live inside your head
the magic of all our dreams
sharing hugs and gifts of love
flying on silvery moonbeams..

Watch closely...


 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 1999-12-19 09:24 PM


This is very good advice, indeed - I'm watching closely... .... Nice work, RG.....
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2 posted 1999-12-19 09:27 PM


RainbowGirl -

So light, feathery and beautiful.
Loved the thoughts ... especially -

'if angel's get their hearts involved
you'll hear an angel cry'

LOVELY - LOVELY - LOVELY
Your heart is in tune with your pen.
~*Marge*~




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Munda
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3 posted 1999-12-19 09:35 PM


RainbowGirl.....you're like a rainbow, beautiful, colourful and always a pleasure to  "see" what you wrote. Beautiful ! : )
Merry Christmas to you !
Hugs,

Munda

Denise
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4 posted 1999-12-19 09:45 PM


Sooooo beautiful, Rainbow!  

 Denise



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5 posted 1999-12-19 10:04 PM


Beautifully written.
Martie
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6 posted 1999-12-19 10:42 PM


Lovely!
Dark Angel
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7 posted 1999-12-20 12:04 PM


RG, Beautiful poem, beautifully written!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 1999-12-20 02:28 AM


The title drew me in, then did the poem
Beautiful!
Liz

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9 posted 1999-12-20 08:31 AM


Lovely, RG!  
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10 posted 1999-12-20 09:01 AM


Beautiful RG
Pepper
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11 posted 1999-12-20 09:14 AM


So very Sweet Rainbow......and thank you for being an angel in my life....


 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



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12 posted 1999-12-20 09:35 AM


really beautiful rainbow, loved this....guess I give ol HT a good work out...poor thing the work is never gonna be done ROFG....big hugs
Poet deVine
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13 posted 1999-12-20 09:54 AM


This is a wonderful poem! You are both a rainbow and an Angel!  

RainbowGirl
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14 posted 1999-12-20 12:17 PM


Bless...   Thanks all, it's more a case of thinking like an angel and acting like a little devil...ooops

Big HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 1999-12-20 01:13 PM


RG,
Hey over here, I've been waiting a long time I hope one gets here before I'm gone. *L* Sy

starboards
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16 posted 1999-12-20 02:37 PM


Rainbow Girl,
  I liked your view on angels...what great things that they are...interesting title too!

Starboards

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17 posted 1999-12-21 08:33 AM


Rainbow, you do deserve to be called Angel ...  


cjs9853
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18 posted 1999-12-21 10:37 AM


really beautiful rainbow like you. merry christmas. love that angel JTF put on his reply
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19 posted 1999-12-21 11:51 AM


Yes angels live inside our heads... I know several who have Thrived in mine... ;-)

Well done RainbowGirl

JTF
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20 posted 1999-12-21 12:00 PM


Yoooooooooo !  Welcome here Feathered one ... I bet you're going to love that place  ...  
RainbowGirl
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21 posted 1999-12-21 03:32 PM


Seymour, Just make sure you duck, sometimes they're flying low..*g*

HUGS

Starboards: Well they help you to sleep at night..

HUGS

JTF: Thanks for the pic but heck, my hair just isn't that long yet..thanks sweetheart

HUSG

CJS: Tis lovely, I agree..

HUGS

LR/NH:  Great to see you here and huge whopping great big HUSG...LOL

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



Michael
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22 posted 1999-12-21 03:38 PM


Wow, RG, what a beautiful work.  I've probably made an angel or two cry in my time...sigh.  Great poem.


Michael

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23 posted 1999-12-21 04:10 PM


RainbowGirl it is so beautiful when you see an angel. Thank you.   I do believe in angels.

 B Gravitt



Coegwyr
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24 posted 1999-12-21 04:24 PM



A beautiful poem from a beautiful person, sort of an angel on angels, I like it.

Nate Dogg
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25 posted 1999-12-21 06:48 PM


Great poem and you are one angel of a poet too!

 Nathan

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26 posted 1999-12-21 07:32 PM


You've certainly earned your wings as far as I'm concerned  

You're definitely Passions' own Rainbow-Angel!      
HUGS


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



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27 posted 1999-12-21 08:44 PM


I never believed that angels were amongst us until i met my wife
she told me that they in fact are
ooooo dis!!

greato poem rainbow (applauds)

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28 posted 1999-12-21 10:50 PM


This is very sweet    Enjoyed this Rainbow Girl

 Share what you are for you are what you share



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