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The Jackal
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0 posted 12-19-1999 07:29 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

pretty boys do talk of pain
lonely nights and sleeping in the rain
like they know..
pretty girls do speak of rage
losing love
feeling distant..squirming in the mud
liars and whiners
never knowing of what they speak
if i outlined it for you
it may take weeks
and it would ruin your pretty little lives
give you a perspective you would not like
show you pretty hate
pretty pain
what true rain feels like
and what rage really is all about..
could you handle that pretty boy?
pretty girl..
pretty world...



 
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Denise
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1 posted 12-19-1999 07:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

No, I'll take a pass on any more pain, thank you...hehehe...great poem, Jackal!

 Denise


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2 posted 12-19-1999 08:23 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Gee, sounds upsetting. What a way to get the point across. Good one.

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3 posted 12-20-1999 12:29 AM       View Profile for roxane   Email roxane   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for roxane

haven't seen you post in a while, but you haven't lost your touch.  this is a great poem.  i hope to read some more of your poetry soon
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