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It's alright (a cadence with some additions by me)

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desperado
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0 posted 12-19-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for desperado


It's alright, it's alright
It's alright, it's ok
It's alright, it's alright
It's alright, it's ok
Remember JFK
He tried to pave the way
To make a better day
It's alright, it's ok
But then they shot him down
From up in downtown
It was a lonesome sound
As that flag came down
It's alright, it's alright
It's alright, it's ok
It's alright, it's alright
It's alright, it's ok
Remember MLK
He tried to pave the way
To make a better day
It's alright, it's ok
For he was killed one morn
When the world was torn
It was a painful thorn
And the world did mourn
It's alright, it's alright
It's alright, it's ok
It's alright, it's alright
It's alright, it's ok
Remember me some day
I tried to pave the way
To make a better day
It's alright, it's ok
It's alright, it's alright
It's alright, it's ok
It's alright, it's alright
It's alright, it's ok

Basic is going good.  just on leave right now for christmas so I'm getting on.  I've met alot of really great people that have meant alot to me these past few weeks.  can't wait to go back and finish up.  well actually I think I can.  lol


 shine a light so bright that all can see
and you will find the joys that echo within me
© Copyright 1999 James Webster - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 12-19-1999 07:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome home, Des! You have been missed! I'm glad you have met some great people there! That sure can help when you are away from home! I like your poem.  

 Denise


Nan
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2 posted 12-19-1999 07:40 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

All right you - didn't I tell you that it's always two words? Oh - That was Intruder.... yeah.... That's  all right then...

But - where's the pic?????

Left...Left, Right, Left....
WhtDove
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3 posted 12-19-1999 08:11 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Glad to see your back for a while. Happy to hear you met some great people!  Pave the way of a better tomorrow!  

Merry Christmas Des!
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 12-19-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hey...it's great to hear you're doing well and home for the holidays!! Seemed like you picked a good time to be at basic training. Nice to see you back on for a while and happy Holidays!
Martie
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5 posted 12-19-1999 10:46 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Very interesting poem--I liked the style--glad to see your name here again and to hear you're doing well.  
Michael
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6 posted 12-19-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Good to hear from you, Des.  Glad all is going O.K.  Glad to see you're still wanting to make a difference - I hope that quality never escapes you, friend.  


Michael
desperado
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7 posted 12-20-1999 01:36 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desperado

thanks you guys.  and as for the picture nan, my message icon says it all.  it's on there somewhere...

perhaps I'll write something I actually like instead of the disjunctured ramblings of someone too tired to remember what a "b" looks like... *wink*

 shine a light so bright that all can see
and you will find the joys that echo within me
starboards
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8 posted 12-20-1999 02:25 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Yes, it is alright, its okay...i like this one...welcome!
 
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