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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


0 posted 12-19-1999 04:27 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Life,
an ocean...

Waves...
Tossing,turning,
open space,

Wind...
Salty is its taste,
Bitter is my friend,

Storms...
Raging all around me,
Rain is falling,

Night...
Darkness comes,
Fear invades,

There is light,
Through clouds of confusion,

Anchor...
The master of the sea,

Life...
Then I breathe,

Hope...
New horizons,
Uncharted journeys,

Peace...
Fear has escaped,
calmness is beauty,

Love...
The great pearl,
One of sacrifice,

Life...
The ocean of endless possibilities.





[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 12-20-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-19-1999 04:35 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is excellent, Romantic Heart, well written.
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2 posted 12-19-1999 04:44 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Oh I agree...very well done! I like this much    It's beautiful!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 12-19-1999 04:49 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Wow! I must have written something right, knowing I received a great compliment from you balladeer!!!!  

Made my day  

THANKS CAROLINE!



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 12-19-1999).]
First__Knight
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4 posted 12-19-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

This one runs a deep as the ocean.....and has left me with my eyes futher opened in revelation.  This is wonderful Romantic Heart  

 Share what you are for you are what you share

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5 posted 12-19-1999 06:51 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Enjoy your poem ver much!!!!
Denise
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6 posted 12-19-1999 07:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree with all the above, simply beautiful!  

 Denise


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7 posted 12-19-1999 07:35 PM       View Profile for far and away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for far and away

Wonderful poem and very well writen, I enjoy it very much!
A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 12-20-1999 01:55 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

First Knight-Deep is the thoughts I often think! I am glad your eyes have been opened!

Van-Thank you for your gracious comment!

De-Thanks my friend your commments are always uplifting!

Far and away-Welcome to passions I am glad you liked the poem!
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9 posted 12-20-1999 01:59 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Interesting poem, i love this topic, it's so serine and beautiful, hope i get the pleasure of reading more of these!

Starboards
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10 posted 12-20-1999 04:16 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thank you Starboards and welcome to passions!

 "Unto every life, A little love must fall!"

samsonheart
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11 posted 12-20-1999 05:30 PM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

This one has such great imagery. I was very impressed, loved it. -samsonheart
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12 posted 12-20-1999 05:40 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I enjoy free verse, but cannot write it as well as you..this is lovely!  
A Romantic Heart
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13 posted 12-21-1999 01:52 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks Samson...like the name!

Poet Devine, thanks for the compliment...honestly I didn't know what form of poetry I was writting, I just wrote it as I was posting and did what came naturally....So this is free verse! Wow!
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