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How Will You Remember Me?
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How Will You Remember Me? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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How Will You Remember Me? ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 When I am gone so far away that I cannot return, how will you remember me? When the morning breeze touches your face, will you believe it's me with a soft caress? At the song of the birds in a new-fallen rain, will it remind you of how my heart sang? At the red dawn of morning, will you recall the warmth of my love? As the sun sets with a rose-gold hue, will you remember the glow of my love? When the orb of the moon rises full in the evening sky, will you remember the stroll , as lovers, we took? I've painted a canvas for you to keep. Love lives forever past the portals of time, as we know it. If tomorrow comes, and I am not there, how will you remember my love? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This gave me goose-pimples, Marge. Beautiful ! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How will I remember you? I'll see your face in skies of blue. I'll hear your voice in robin's song And bless the day you came along. I'll feel your touch in April's breeze That whispers gently through the trees. Your smile will be the break of day Your laughter in a child at play. I'll sense your sadness moaning low In cruel November winds that blow Down canyon walls and then beyond Long after you are finally gone. I'll see your kindness everywhere I see one take the time to share. I'll see your generosity In all the things you've given me. I'll never find a box so large To hold the love you gave, dear Marge If I miss you when we're apart I'll simply look inside my heart. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, I love the thoughts and the visions in this poem. It's lovely just like you Liz Balladeer, I liked your poem also. I think we all feel the same way. Liz |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marge: If I thought someone would remember me like that, it would be worth dying but only if I could come back afterwards...  Beautiful and eloquent, full of sunshine! HUSG Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I enjoy this poem very much.I'm looking forward to read your other poems too |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so lovely and touching, Marge. So very nice! Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice trek you pen us through here, Marge... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda - Thank you. I like 'goose-bumps'. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Balladeer - That is just a beautiful response. The mere thought that my post illicited such a beautiful poem from you ... just gives me Munda's 'goosebumps'. You are the sweetest gentleman. Likewise ... you are in my heart and in my thoughts. Thank you dear, sweet Balladeer. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Elizabeth, my friend - Lovely thoughts from a lovely lady. Thank you so much. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ RainbowGirl - It is so important that we live our lives so we are worth remembering. You can and you do. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Vandana - Why, thank you love. I will look forward to writing more for you to read. Keep on with 'making memories'. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Denise - Thanks friend of mine. And I will remember you. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Nan - Glad to have you along for the trek. Thank you so kindly. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ *I wrote this after thinking of people who have been in my life and left impressions that they may have never known they left. When I think of love ... they spring easily into my thoughts. Love to you all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marge, how can anyone remember you but the beautiful person you are |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I'd remember a heart so large with love for everyone....always open to accept another friend... Lovely poem Marge... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes a person think for sure |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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