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How Will You Remember Me?

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Marge Tindal
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How Will You Remember Me?
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

When I am gone
so far away
that
I cannot return,
how will you
remember me?



When the morning breeze
touches your face,
will you believe
it's me
with
a soft caress?


At the song of the birds
in a new-fallen rain,
will it remind you
of how
my heart sang?


At the red dawn
of morning,
will you
recall
the warmth
of my love?


As the sun sets
with a rose-gold hue,
will you
remember
the glow
of my love?


When the orb of the moon
rises full
in the evening sky,
will you remember
the stroll ,
as lovers,
we took?


I've painted a canvas
for you to keep.
Love lives forever
past the portals
of time,
as we know it.

If tomorrow comes,
and
I am not there,
how
will
you
remember
my
love?





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 12-19-1999 04:53 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

This gave me goose-pimples, Marge.
Beautiful !
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2 posted 12-19-1999 05:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

How will I remember you?
I'll see your face in skies of blue.
I'll hear your voice in robin's song
And bless the day you came along.

I'll feel your touch in April's breeze
That whispers gently through the trees.
Your smile will be the break of day
Your laughter in a child at play.

I'll sense your sadness moaning low
In cruel November winds that blow
Down canyon walls and then beyond
Long after you are finally gone.

I'll see your kindness everywhere
I see one take the time to share.
I'll see your generosity
In all the things you've given me.

I'll never find a box so large
To hold the love you gave, dear Marge
If I miss you when we're apart
I'll simply look inside my heart.
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 12-19-1999 05:44 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge,
I love the thoughts and the visions in this poem. It's lovely just like you
Liz


Balladeer,
I liked your poem also. I think we all feel the same way.
Liz
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4 posted 12-19-1999 05:47 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Marge: If I thought someone would remember me like that, it would be worth dying but only if I could come back afterwards...

Beautiful and eloquent, full of sunshine!

HUSG



 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


vandana
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5 posted 12-19-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I enjoy this poem very much.I'm looking forward to read your other poems too
Denise
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This is so lovely and touching, Marge. So very nice!  

 Denise


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7 posted 12-19-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice trek you pen us through here, Marge...
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 12-19-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Munda -
Thank you.  I like 'goose-bumps'.
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Balladeer -
That is just a beautiful response.
The mere thought that my post illicited
such a beautiful poem from you ...
just gives me Munda's 'goosebumps'.

You are the sweetest gentleman.
Likewise ... you are in my heart
and in my thoughts.

Thank you dear, sweet Balladeer.
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Elizabeth, my friend -
Lovely thoughts from a lovely lady.
Thank you so much.
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RainbowGirl -

It is so important that we live our
lives so we are worth remembering.
You can and you do.
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Vandana -
Why, thank you love.
I will look forward to writing more
for you to read.
Keep on with 'making memories'.
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Denise -
Thanks friend of mine.
And I will remember you.
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Nan -
Glad to have you along for the trek.
Thank you so kindly.
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*I wrote this after thinking of people
who have been in my life and left impressions
that they may have never known they left.
When I think of love ... they spring easily into my thoughts.
Love to you all.  ~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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Marge, how can anyone remember you but the beautiful person you are  
Pepper
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10 posted 12-20-1999 09:52 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I'd remember a heart so large with love for everyone....always open to accept another friend...
Lovely poem Marge...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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makes a person think
for sure
Artic Wind
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enjoyed

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