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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-19 12:39 PM



Do you know what's lonely?
Maybe I have something inside of me,
But somehow,
I kept saying that something is missing
my heart ,
Can you seee my lonelinesss?
Can you feel my pain and sorrow?
My heart is empty as ever?
Can you come and feel my heart with love?
that's always missing ,
Maybe you can become part of my heart,
Then this heart of mine can become one,
You know how I feel when my heart becomes weak,
Everytime you go away,
So don't go,
Then our hearts can be alive forever,



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Denise
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1 posted 1999-12-19 06:29 PM


So sad, vandana. You have captured that feeling of 'lonely' very well.  

 Denise



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