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far and away
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Friends or maybe more


A friend is someone who you like and know,
Through time, the relationship seems to grow,

This relationship is built from trust,
To find a good friend is like finding a diamond in the dust,

To find that diamond, sometimes you must look hard,
But once you find it can pay high rewards,

Someone who you can bleed your heart to for advice,
Giving you many answers and never asking for a price,

Giving you a new look at what you need to see,
Always with an open ear, or helping hand at your time of need,

Picking you up when you are feeling so down,
Making you want smile, when you feel like you want to frown,

Making you laugh, when you want cry,
Lifting your spirits, never letting them die,

Drying the tears of your biggest fears,
Making your mind and thoughts seem so clear,

A friend can be like an angel from above,
Giving you a great feeling of being loved,

Sometimes the relationship builds into something special after a while,
After taking many steps, and walking many miles,

Could it be worth the price of finding something more,
One will never know unless they try to open that door.


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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-19-1999 02:00 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I agree, I agree, I agree
You've said a lot here. Friendship is truly a gift
Liz
Denise
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2 posted 12-19-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yep, friendship is a treasure for sure! Lovely sentiments here, far and away!  

 Denise


far and away
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3 posted 12-19-1999 07:16 PM       View Profile for far and away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for far and away

Thank you Liz and Denise for your replies!  I am new here and appreciate your replies.  I love reading poetry and decided to try. Feel free to comment on how I could make my poetry better.

Thanks
WhtDove
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4 posted 12-19-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Far and Away, I am amazed! For one who is just trying you've done a spectacular job on this.  I wouldn't change a thing! The feelings are well written and just all together a great poem!  WOW!  I really liked this one, and it really hit home. Thank you for posting this!  More, more!
Nan
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5 posted 12-19-1999 07:51 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hello, far and away....
I like your poem a lot - If you'd like to learn more - Feel free to join our workshops...
Welcome aboard...
 
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