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Cupidís Christmas Gift (Sonnet promised to Kess)

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Munda
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0 posted 12-19-1999 11:09 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda


Cupidís Christmas Gift

When least expected Cupid shot his dart
To finílly exile echoes of the past
My tilts at windmills, tearing up my heart
Remembíring pain my mind so long harrassed

His love like sunshine from behind a cloud
A rainbowís gift upon a dreary day
Declaring universal love aloud
A single tear to cleanse the past away

As touched by Angelís wings is how I feel
Embraced by love so true and real by he
My spirit wanders free, my soul will heal
The love of God lies in the depth of me.

A new beginning, Christmas will somehow
be better yearly, weíre a famíly now.

Munda

© Copyright 1999 Munda - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 12-19-1999 11:25 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice Munda, I enjoyed.
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2 posted 12-19-1999 11:28 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Enchanting, Munda. And where have you been? I do believe your work has been missed here!  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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Munda I enjoyed this! How wonderful!
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Munda, very sweet
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Beautiful! Wonderful sonnet!  

 Denise


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WOW..... Excellent, Munda....
Perfect iambic pentameter...
Rhyme scheme intact..
Theme development....
You get an "A" for sure....

I'm dancin'......
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HUGE grins ...

Munda, this is absolutely lovely -- I am so honored that you wrote it at my request.  I agree with Nan -- but is there anything better than an "A?"  

--Kess


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8 posted 12-19-1999 10:30 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Munda -

Wonderful !
Perfectly wonderful !
~*Marge*~


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Munda
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Mike, Whtdove, Ruth, Denise, Marge....thank you for reading and your comment. I appreciate it a lot. : )

Caroline...thanks for your kind words and missing me. : ) I am a bit busy at the moment, but I'll peep in whenever I can. : )

Nan....an A ????? and dancing ???? Oops I'm blushing ! ; )

Kess.....is there anything better than an A ?
Yes, your compliment. : ) Thanks Kess for your lessons. See you in the Workshop. : )

Merry Christmas to you all !

Munda : )
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wow...what a great sonnet...i wish that i could write them but that would take actual talent...the one thing that i lack..great job though!

Starboards
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Simply Wonderful Munda....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Munda
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Starboards: Thank you and LOL believe me, sonnets are NOT my forte, it's a 'fight', so please try it some day, you may surprise yourself. : )

Pepper: : ) Thank you : )
Elizabeth Santos
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Excellent, Munda
A lovely sonnet, I enjoyed it!
Liz
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