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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 12-19-1999 01:23 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

My soul has long seeked
The glitter of my dreams
Reaching outward
Towards the silver skies
Wanting only
Acceptance.

My heart once yearned
To be understood
A tender hand to hold
A soft embrace
Wishing only for
A friend.

I once felt abandoned
Within this world
Iced over
Closed from life
Needing only
To be lifted up.

In the light of your eyes
My body emmersed
I am now whole
So safe here
Wrapped within the cloak
Of you.

Upon warming wings
I fly
As you carress my face
And whisper tenderly
I know now
You are where I belong.

~Jeff, you are my world, and I love you more than anything~


 *Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~

© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Dusk Treader
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1 posted 12-19-1999 01:31 AM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Isn't that sweet!?    Great poem, Krista, I'm happy for you two, hehe..  

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn.
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 12-19-1999 02:15 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ah....you're so sappy when you're in love!  hehe  Join the sappy club!  I'm the treasurer!  LOL  Great poem, really!  So glad to see more of your stuff!

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Seaangel
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3 posted 12-19-1999 02:55 AM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

Lovely poem, Alwye, especially liked the first part..."the glitter of dreams"... and "warming wings"..beautiful.
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4 posted 12-19-1999 04:23 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Tis very well done my friend.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ
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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 12-19-1999 08:17 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Veyr nicely written Alwye and I like the form you used here...just a discussion I had with another poet about free verse the other day...who says free verse can't be formed? The format work well with this. Nicely done  
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 12-19-1999 08:19 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Beaytifully written from a heart in love
Liz
WhtDove
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7 posted 12-19-1999 10:42 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Alwye this was beautiful! Ain't love grand? hehe, glad to see you happy!
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8 posted 12-19-1999 11:26 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

So lovely, this is, Alwye...I always love your poetry. Nice to see your heart is happy, friend  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Pepper
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9 posted 12-19-1999 11:33 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

So sweet..left my heart smiling Alwye

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Denise
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10 posted 12-19-1999 06:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, me too! This brought a smile to my heart!  

 Denise


Alwye
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11 posted 12-19-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Yes, my heart is indeed happy.    Thank you all so much for your kind words, it means a lot to me.

 *Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~

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12 posted 12-19-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Delightful, Krista, and congratulations.
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13 posted 12-19-1999 09:30 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Alwye -
Ah ... love that makes the heart sing,
what a wonderful feeling you've portrayed.
Best of everything to you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Munda
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14 posted 12-19-1999 09:41 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I'm so happy for you Alwye ! : ) A lovely poem you wrote. I loved it.
Merry Christmas to both of you. : )
Hugs.

Munda


 
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