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An old poem of mine

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Master
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0 posted 12-19-1999 12:47 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I spoke to her while she was listening
“True love is missing what you have”
First, she responded with a laugh
Then said to me, “true love is missing”

“True love is present when I kiss you,”
I said to her, “Just try to see”
She closed her eyes, then spoke to me
“I hope you know, I truly miss you”



 I fell in love and kept on falling

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-19-1999 06:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like true love to me! This is sweet, Master!  

 Denise


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 12-19-1999 06:16 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Master,
Interesting, enjoyed.
Master
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Thank you both, I wish it was true love!
Elizabeth Santos
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An old poem, new to me
I like it!
Liz
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New to me too!  Let's hope it grows!

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season
Keep Christ in CHRISTmas

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6 posted 12-19-1999 10:24 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I wrote this about a year ago, but I only posted it once before. Glad you liked it!
 
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