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Goodbye ( to Sonya)

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Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
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Georgia, Fulton


0 posted 12-18-1999 11:01 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This poem is basically true. I just added some lines to give it some pep.

The time that feared most has come.
We used to be together as one.
But today, we will go our seperate ways.
Baby, please don't cry
because, it was meant for you and I
Even though I have to say gooodbye,
our love for one another will never die.
While you'll be headed to Georgia,
I'll be headed for Florida.
I will miss you very much
because, only you got that midas touch.
I love you like no other
because, you are my lover.
I wish you the best of luck in the future
because, you turned me into a winner when I was a loser.
Thank God for you
because, you've made my dreams come true.
Now wipe your weepy eyes
and give me a long and passionate kiss of goodbye.


 Nathan
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Denise
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1 posted 12-18-1999 02:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is sad, Nate. I'm sorry that it's true.


 Denise


sraet
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2 posted 12-18-1999 02:17 PM       View Profile for sraet   Email sraet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sraet

wow, this is heart wrenching... especially the last line, reminds me of something (or someone).  I hate sad endings!  
Nate Dogg
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Thank you for the comments! I'm glad y'll liked it.

 Nathan
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sad stuff
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


5 posted 11-12-2007 06:52 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

enjoyed and very sad!

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