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Love at First Sight

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TomS
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0 posted 12-18-1999 10:30 AM       View Profile for TomS   Email TomS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomS

I remember that evening months ago
like a seed falling on warm ground
Feeling a pull, a need so basic
once together it was so natural

I remember your beauty, your eyes
and something else deep in you
Like sadness covered with courage
yet there was such calm and sweetness

The seed started to sprout as we teased
The long glances were like water
Your smile, your face, your eyes
Those lovely pools that I fell into

When we danced and touched
your arms were like roots spreading within me
Your kiss was warm air and sunlight
making a complete and living thing

Now it is dried between the pages of a book
A book that is opened every time I hear from you
I never fail to look at it
and remember that evening months ago

It is done growing now
but oh what a wondrous thing it is
For it produced a seed
that may one day grow again
© Copyright 1999 TomS - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-18-1999 10:37 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

TomS -

Welcome to Passions.

Your thoughts are just lovely.
I hope the seed blossoms.
Quite a 'gardener' you are,
tending these words so expertly.
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 12-18-1999 11:02 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Very nicely done! I like this a lot...look forward to reading more from you! Let me know if you ever have any questions about our home!  
WhtDove
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3 posted 12-18-1999 01:49 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME!  What a memory to have and hold. This was great! I hope that seed will one day again bloom. Hope to see more from you!
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4 posted 12-18-1999 01:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Tom!  Very beautiful poem!

 Denise


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5 posted 12-18-1999 02:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Tom,
Enjoyed the read.
Nan
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6 posted 12-18-1999 04:59 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Ah yes..... another hopeless romantic... Welcome aboard, Tom.....
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7 posted 12-20-1999 09:07 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Spring comes again... and the seeds respond to the warmth. *S* Welcome!
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Oh how beautiful....welcome to passions  
Dolphins3
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Tom Welcome Great poem.
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Lovely piece!...Welcome to Passions Tom

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


 
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