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JD
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0 posted 1999-12-17 11:25 PM


School and Sleep


In school its such a bore
I want to go home go out that door
I’m ready to go to sleep
Oh look I see sheep
I don’t want to go to anymore classes
Oh man I lost my glasses
Ouch I hit my head
I want to go to sleep in my nice soft bed
The teacher walked by
Good I can close my eye
I get tapped on the shoulder
Because I lost my folder
My leg feels funny
Is that a bunny
Dosing off into dreamy land
I never knew we had that many glands
Why did she call on me
Never mind I’m going to sleep
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
ZZZZZZZZZZZZ
ZZZZZZZZ
ZZZ
Z


© Copyright 1999 JD - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 1999-12-17 11:26 PM


Cute, JD! I am sure many of us can relate.  

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes


Blue Eyed Wanderer
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2 posted 1999-12-17 11:32 PM


Sounds like me at school--always dozing off dreaming about you  )  I thought this was cute! I love you.

~Jess~

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3 posted 1999-12-18 12:32 PM


LOL, I definitely understand this!  Great work!

 *Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~


starboards
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4 posted 1999-12-18 12:43 PM


School seems to have this effect on all of us...great job expressing it! I like this one!

starboards

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Isis
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5 posted 1999-12-18 12:55 PM


JD great laugh.  We didn't sleep we mucked up!!  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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6 posted 1999-12-18 01:14 AM


LOL, Sounds like me in.... well I'll be darned, all 4 hours!  Funny poem, thanks for posting  

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn.

JD
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7 posted 1999-12-18 12:21 PM


Thank you all for your grest Replys.



JD



 Everything Dies



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