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Blue Eyed Wanderer
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0 posted 1999-12-17 11:13 PM


The constant thoughts that fill my mind
Are of you, my only love.
You're the shoulder when I'm crying and
The one I'm dreaming of.

You're my first thought in the morning
And last one late at night.
You changed so much by loving me;
For once my life is right.

Nothing seems to matter now,
Except for what we share...
You're the first to take away my scars;
The first who's always there.

You're everything I could wish for;
Fulfilling all my dreams.
Now those joyous tears of happiness are
Tumbling down in streams.

I'd never be able to describe
With all words man does know,
Yet through this and all my actions
I hope my love does show.


**I love you Justin with all my heart and soul**

~Jess~

© Copyright 1999 Jessica Sousa - All Rights Reserved
JD
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1 posted 1999-12-17 11:18 PM


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Your love shows to me more than u think Jessica  

Your loveing Boyfriend Justin  

 Everything Dies



Elizabeth
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2 posted 1999-12-17 11:38 PM


Blue Eyed Wanderer, I enjoyed the read. You have a talent!

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes


hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-12-18 02:16 AM


This is sweet and I like his reply  
Blue Eyed Wanderer
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4 posted 1999-12-18 07:59 AM


Elizabeth and Hoot--Thank you both very much!

Justin--

Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 1999-12-18 08:16 AM


Yes, your love shows and so does his.
How wonderful.
Loved the poem
Liz

JD
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6 posted 1999-12-18 12:29 PM


I just want to thank everyone for the nice comments about me and my girlfriend Jessica and her poem.

I figered this poem desved another reply Jessica so I figer I tell u this

I U Jessica

Will u marry me?

JD

 Everything Dies



Pepper
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7 posted 1999-12-18 12:55 PM


Oh Wow.....a proposal...soooo romantic......I'm dying to hear your answer BEW......         
Lovely poem btw...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



Blue Eyed Wanderer
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8 posted 1999-12-18 02:10 PM


Justin--Whoa! That caught me a teensy bit off guard! Course I will baby! We just have to wait a couple of years because its kinda just a little bit against the law right now.   I love you...

Elizabeth Santos and Pepper--thank you both so much for the comments...they mean a lot!  

Denise
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9 posted 1999-12-18 03:15 PM


This is lovely! So very nice!

 Denise



Alwye
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10 posted 1999-12-18 09:57 PM


So beautiful!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~


caroline
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11 posted 1999-12-18 10:04 PM


This is marvelous    

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



WhtDove
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12 posted 1999-12-19 01:19 AM


Beautiful poem! It shows it really does!  And now a marriage proposal on top of it? Oh my!  Woohoo!!  Best of luck you two!
Kelly
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13 posted 1999-12-19 03:26 AM


Great poem! Congratulations to you both.
hoot_owl_rn
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14 posted 1999-12-19 08:14 AM


*****Hands out the bags of rice *****

Wow a marriage proposal right her on passions. WOW!! What a great way to propose. Congrats you two  

Blue Eyed Wanderer
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15 posted 1999-12-19 09:13 AM


dsnyder, alwye, caroline, whtdove, kelly, and hoot~~Thanks everyone! The big day probably won't be for at least another 5 years or so, cause I want to finish high school and college first, but you'll all be the first to know when exactly it'll be, and of course you'll all be invited!  

~Jess~

JD
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16 posted 1999-12-19 04:46 PM


   2006 Valentin's Day  
Hows that sound Jessica and everyone else.


I   YOU JESSICA

JD



 Everything Dies



Blue Eyed Wanderer
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17 posted 1999-12-19 05:01 PM


You should know that any date is fine with me baby   I love you...can't wait to talk to you tonight...

Thanks again to everyone here!

~Jess~

samsonheart
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18 posted 1999-12-20 01:27 AM


Jess, I'm a new member, this is my first reply, and your poem caught my eye so I thought I'd say how much I liked it.  Very good job. -samsonheart
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