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I Hope My Love Does Show

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Blue Eyed Wanderer
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0 posted 12-17-1999 11:13 PM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

The constant thoughts that fill my mind
Are of you, my only love.
You're the shoulder when I'm crying and
The one I'm dreaming of.

You're my first thought in the morning
And last one late at night.
You changed so much by loving me;
For once my life is right.

Nothing seems to matter now,
Except for what we share...
You're the first to take away my scars;
The first who's always there.

You're everything I could wish for;
Fulfilling all my dreams.
Now those joyous tears of happiness are
Tumbling down in streams.

I'd never be able to describe
With all words man does know,
Yet through this and all my actions
I hope my love does show.


**I love you Justin with all my heart and soul**

~Jess~
© Copyright 1999 Jessica Sousa - All Rights Reserved
JD
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1 posted 12-17-1999 11:18 PM       View Profile for JD   Email JD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JD

y

Your love shows to me more than u think Jessica  

Your loveing Boyfriend Justin  

 Everything Dies


Elizabeth
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2 posted 12-17-1999 11:38 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Blue Eyed Wanderer, I enjoyed the read. You have a talent!

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 12-18-1999 02:16 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is sweet and I like his reply  
Blue Eyed Wanderer
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4 posted 12-18-1999 07:59 AM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

Elizabeth and Hoot--Thank you both very much!

Justin--
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 12-18-1999 08:16 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Yes, your love shows and so does his.
How wonderful.
Loved the poem
Liz
JD
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6 posted 12-18-1999 12:29 PM       View Profile for JD   Email JD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JD

I just want to thank everyone for the nice comments about me and my girlfriend Jessica and her poem.

I figered this poem desved another reply Jessica so I figer I tell u this

I U Jessica

Will u marry me?

JD

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Pepper
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7 posted 12-18-1999 12:55 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Oh Wow.....a proposal...soooo romantic......I'm dying to hear your answer BEW......         
Lovely poem btw...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Blue Eyed Wanderer
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8 posted 12-18-1999 02:10 PM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

Justin--Whoa! That caught me a teensy bit off guard! Course I will baby! We just have to wait a couple of years because its kinda just a little bit against the law right now.   I love you...

Elizabeth Santos and Pepper--thank you both so much for the comments...they mean a lot!  
Denise
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9 posted 12-18-1999 03:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely! So very nice!

 Denise


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10 posted 12-18-1999 09:57 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So beautiful!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~

caroline
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11 posted 12-18-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This is marvelous    

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


WhtDove
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12 posted 12-19-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Beautiful poem! It shows it really does!  And now a marriage proposal on top of it? Oh my!  Woohoo!!  Best of luck you two!
Kelly
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13 posted 12-19-1999 03:26 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Great poem! Congratulations to you both.
hoot_owl_rn
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14 posted 12-19-1999 08:14 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*****Hands out the bags of rice *****

Wow a marriage proposal right her on passions. WOW!! What a great way to propose. Congrats you two  
Blue Eyed Wanderer
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15 posted 12-19-1999 09:13 AM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

dsnyder, alwye, caroline, whtdove, kelly, and hoot~~Thanks everyone! The big day probably won't be for at least another 5 years or so, cause I want to finish high school and college first, but you'll all be the first to know when exactly it'll be, and of course you'll all be invited!  

~Jess~
JD
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16 posted 12-19-1999 04:46 PM       View Profile for JD   Email JD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JD

   2006 Valentin's Day  
Hows that sound Jessica and everyone else.


I   YOU JESSICA

JD



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Blue Eyed Wanderer
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17 posted 12-19-1999 05:01 PM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

You should know that any date is fine with me baby   I love you...can't wait to talk to you tonight...

Thanks again to everyone here!

~Jess~
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18 posted 12-20-1999 01:27 AM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

Jess, I'm a new member, this is my first reply, and your poem caught my eye so I thought I'd say how much I liked it.  Very good job. -samsonheart
 
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