navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #4 » Meeting my Father
Open Poetry #4
Post A Reply Post New Topic Meeting my Father Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-12-17 08:56 PM


Well the time has come at last,
A lifelong dream fulfilled,
I will meet my biological father,
Be still my heart be still.

Tuesday December 21st at about 8.00 am,
I shall finally meet him face to face,
Be held within his arms,
I can think of no finer place.

32 years of mystery solved,
Finding answers and so much to share,
To put a face to that welcoming voice,
Finally knowing he does indeed care.

It's kind of childish I know,
But there's still a little girl inside,
Who longed to be in her real father's arms,
In a place so warm, she could hide.

My circle of life will be complete then,
No more questions, doubts or fears,
Only love and acceptance,
To make up for all those years.

Then new journeys will begin,
Journeys of knowledge and discovery,
My soul and heart now have their answers,
I can think of nothing more lovely.

It's the kind of girl I am,
Yes I was a daddy's girl,
Now I can be twice over,
My heart now spins and twirls.

I hope he's pleased with what he sees,
Sees and likes the person I am,
Hope he's proud to call me daughter,
Hope he's proud of what I am.

A loving lady, with loving ways,
Creative and musical too,
Generous and thoughtful through and through,
I hope he sees all this too.

I can hardly contain myself,
Tuesday will be filled with many emotions too,
A day that will go down in family history,
A magical and memorable day through and through.

So this poem is for you Dad,
Welcome to my home,
No more our hearts need wonder,
No more they'll need to roam.




 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-12-17 09:03 PM


Wow all that pent up emotion, the anxiety, the hope, the longing, the hunger was so beautifully felt through your words!  I pray this is only the begining of making a lifetime of wonderful memories.
Gemini
Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
2 posted 1999-12-17 09:15 PM


Best wishes to you and for your meeting.  It sounds like your heart has wings!?  Having my father die when I was 18, I can appreciate the welcoming home of someone special.  I enjoyed your poem.
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-12-17 09:16 PM


That's wonderful, Isis! I am so glad for you! I hope everything meets...no exceeds your expectations! Let us know!

 Denise



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-12-17 09:17 PM


Thanks A Sandgrain, I hope it all works out too  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
5 posted 1999-12-17 09:19 PM


He will love you, Lisa. Have no fear. Everything will work out as it is supposed to...and your poem will touch his heart.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-12-17 09:27 PM


Thanks Gemini and Denise I'll keep you informed  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 1999-12-17 09:33 PM


Thanks Balladeer for the vote of confidence  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
8 posted 1999-12-17 09:45 PM


Lisa:...I love it and from the other side of the coin, I understand as well...but, honesty must prevail...my fears, had I of met my daughter were the same as yours but naturally in reverse...sometimes love can give us expectations that may or may not be realised....I can only tell you this, I would be proud if you were mine!

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
9 posted 1999-12-17 09:51 PM


I know how you feel.......my wife met her siblings after 21 years. Sad to say...the years couldn't be bridged.
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
10 posted 1999-12-17 09:58 PM


A reunion of the blood, a reunion of the spirits, it will be a beautiful reunion for sure. Just in this poem, you have already opened your heart to him. Just in your longing to meet him, he spiritually felt the same desire, I'm sure. The love is already in place, just waiting for an embrace. Your poem is beautiful
Liz

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
11 posted 1999-12-17 11:14 PM


It's a wonderful poem Isis....it shows what's in your heart and I'm sure your father will be moved....
As you know, I'm thrilled for you  


 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



Tina TT
Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 45
Victoria, Australia
12 posted 1999-12-17 11:32 PM


Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem- it was very heartfelt...and made me remember to appreciate my own father!  

 ~What if you slept? What if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower? And what if, when you awoke, you had that flower in your hand? Aye, what then?~



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
13 posted 1999-12-18 12:03 PM


On cloud 9 you are. Lisa I wish you all the best and I hope you have a lot of memories to build together!  
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
14 posted 1999-12-18 12:11 PM


Thankx everyone for your kind responses, wishes and prayers.  
RobertB how sad for your wife, I'm hoping despite differences our bridges can be crossed.
I'll let you all know how it goes.

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
15 posted 1999-12-18 12:12 PM


RainbowGirl thankyou that is such a beautiful thing to say.. ((HUGS))

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
16 posted 1999-12-18 12:20 PM


How wonderful for you and your family!!!  This is a beautiful tribute and I'm sure he will be proud!  You seem to be a lovely lady. Warmest wishes to you!  
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
17 posted 1999-12-18 02:28 AM


I am so excited and happy for you. May he be everything you want him to be and may your meeting go well. You will be in my thoughts and prayers  
RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
18 posted 1999-12-20 10:42 PM


Lisa: I'm so pleased that all went well for you both...

One smiling Cindy here..

HUSG

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



Fairy Colours
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169
Sunrise,Fl,US
19 posted 1999-12-20 10:58 PM


I'm crossing my fingers for you... but I know I don't need to because I think he'll be very proud with what he sees.

--A Little Fairy--

Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
20 posted 1999-12-21 08:15 AM


Beautiful Isis. . .

I can only repeat how happy that I am for you. . . don't worry, if he sees in you what the rest of us do, he will care about you very much. . .

Good luck my friend. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
21 posted 1999-12-22 05:33 PM


WoW! That was as beautiful poem. I'm glad that you've met your father. I don't even know my father's name.

 Nathan

Justina
Junior Member
since 1999-10-31
Posts 24
Kansas City. MO
22 posted 1999-12-25 09:57 PM


I am 19, and today (Christmas) was the first time in my life to ever speak to my Biological father.  Im not sure why he chose for it to be this way, and maybe he didnt.  Everything happens for a reason I suppose. I was over joyed to finally put a voice with the picture in my mind. So I totally understand where you are coming from! I hope all went well with you and your father!  Merry Christmas!
Love & Happiness
Justina

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

23 posted 1999-12-25 10:29 PM


Lisa - I hope so much that it all went well.
Thoughts and hugs - and of course he will love his poet child.

K

 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #4 » Meeting my Father

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary