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Denise
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0 posted 12-17-1999 08:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

A babe for us was born of humble birth
In stable crude He came in lowliness
God's special gift for all the sons of earth
His favor shown to man in graciousness.

His coming told by prophets long ago
So fervently they longed to see His day
Messiah, Son of God, sent to bestow
Salvation free to those in error's way.

Hosannas to the King was heaven's song
'Neath Bethlehem's star-sprinkled velvet sky
Still ages past angelic beings long
To comprehend redemption from on high.

Receive His gift, it came at quite a cost
His life He paid to seek and save the lost.


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For unto us a child is born, unto us a son is given
And the government shall be upon His shoulders
And He shall be called Wonderful Counselor, Mighty God, Everlasting Father, Prince of Peace.
Isaiah 9:6


I wish you and yours a very blessed Christmas!



 Denise




[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-17-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-17-1999 08:15 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Denise,
This poem IS Christmas, and so beautiful
I also wish you and your family a very Merry Christmas and hope some day to meet the two little angels you sent us
Liz
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Very beautiful work..I too wish you and your family a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~

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King of Kings and Lord of Lords -
And he shall reign forever and ever...
Hallelujah!!
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4 posted 12-17-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Merry Christmas, Denise. Thank you for your wonderful presence.
Denise
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Thank you, Elizabeth, Krista, Nan and Balladeer for reading and for your kind comments! You all are just the best!

 Denise


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Denise I am in awe! This was beautiful and so fitting! Thank you for this!  

Merry Christmas
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Beautiful work as always, my friend, and Merry Christmas!

Elizabeth

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

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Heavenly  
Denise
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Thank you, Rebecca, Elizabeth, and Ruth. I'm glad you enjoyed it!  

 Denise


Nate Dogg
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10 posted 12-18-1999 03:45 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful poem Whitedove! Have a Merry Christmas and have a happy new year.
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Thank you Nate, I'm glad you enjoyed it!  
Merry Christmas to you too!

(I'm not WhtDove, though, as lovely a compliment as that is! I am Denise!)

 Denise


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12 posted 12-18-1999 05:20 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

Beautiful poem, Denise. I am not religious but do appreciate the skill of this.
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Agree with Ruth, Heavenly! I love the last two lines!
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really, really nice Denise.
This is the kind of poem that should adorn a card, you know...

K
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Seaangel, Master and Severn, thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments!


 Denise


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The beauty you have with words that speak your faith are heavenly--Merry Christmas!
Denise
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Thank you, Martie! I'm glad you liked it!  

 Denise


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18 posted 12-19-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

This is beautiful Denise ! I loved it. Nobody noticed yet it was a sonnet ? LOL I seem to have a "thing" for sonnets lately. ; )
Merry Christmas to you Denise !
Hugs.

Munda : )
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I have been away for a few days....and I almost missed this work of art of yours.  This is truely wonderful and I am glad I found it   Thank you Denise

 Share what you are for you are what you share

Dark Angel
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Denise, this is most beautiful!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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LOVELY Denise, Merry Christmas to you!!!

 mcestrada
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I loved your poem.  Very well written.  And by His stripes we are healed.

samsonheart
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Thanks Munda, me too! Seems I'm hooked on them now!                          

Thank you so much, First Knight! I'm glad you liked it!

Dark Angel, thank you also! I'm so glad you thought it was beautiful!

mc, thank you too for reading and commenting!

Samsonheart, thanks so much and AMEN!

 Denise


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24 posted 12-21-1999 01:58 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Denise This is what Christmas is really about!  

JESUS!!!!!

Merry Christmas!

It's great to see your photo! It is nice!
 
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