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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-17 06:58 PM



I love the way you treat me,
You smiled and laughed,
Your sweet talk that makes me
you're still the one for me
The kind of love gave,
I'm happy with your sweet touch,
I'm still the one one for you,
No ground that I had to stand on my own,
When I have you around
No stars that'll make us happy ,
Unless I've this love,
No fame or fortune I need ,
I love the way you treat me,
You smiled and laughed,
Your sweet talk that makes me
you're still the one I need

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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1 posted 1999-12-19 01:17 AM


Well, I've had someone tell me that time after time - with me saying, "No, you're not!"  LOL  I just couldn't convince him that I didn't feel the same!  I now understand what it feels like to be on the "other" side of it....thanks!
Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-20 08:31 PM


I think this would make a great song, vandana!  

 Denise



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