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Kevin
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0 posted 12-17-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Lost in the moment
you drift from the scene
eyes on each other
brief seconds serene.
Together we fade
from anything real
alone with each other
and all that we feel.
Your eyes all I need
to love you tonight
canít give you a reason,
just know that itís right.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-17-1999 06:21 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Wow kevin, I like this one! A real romeo you are! keep it up!

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"You will see a lot of things,
But they will mean nothing to you
If you lose sight of the thing you love."
-from the movie "At First Site"
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2 posted 12-17-1999 06:41 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Nice work, Kevin!  
Elizabeth Santos
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Very lovely little poem!
Liz
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Kevin, the rhyme and rhythm are great in this one...oh, and I'm kind of fond of the subject matter too...romance is wonderful   Well done!
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5 posted 12-18-1999 03:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kevin -

With such beautiful words ...
you don't need any other reason.
BEAUTIFUL !
~*Marge*~


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cool!
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sweeet
 
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