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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Cygnus (or "The Swan") is a constellation. It is also called, "The Northern Cross." Swan of the north Wings spread in flight Guide our ship forth Through the darkness of the night. Guide our hearts home From places afar We'll never be alone As long still shines your brightest star. Shine Deneb bright Shine like her eyes For her face is the light For which my heart cries. That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Sven! Very lovely! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Flowed very nicely. Well done, I enjoyed. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you for the astrology lesson and the good read  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, this is really beautiful and flowed nicely. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Write about swans, and you've got me.... Tack sa mycket, Sven..... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You hit a tender spot I like this poen alot. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sven This woman in your poetry Seems like you never quite get to her It's driving me crazy! This is beautiful Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . . Mike. . .the flow is the hardest part Denise, Hoot, and Dark Angel. . . thank you for your words. . . Nan. . .swans are a new inspiration for me, I hope to do more with them. . . Sy. . .glad to hear that I spoke to you. . . Elizabeth. . . my friend, I have not yet quite gotten to my muse yet, but she knows who she is, she is the one that inspires the light in my eyes. . . when I meet her, you'll know. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Sven-- A poem about the stars has to be good, and you my friend, have proven this further, great job! Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sven, this is gorgeous. A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
What poetry! Very nice, Sven. samsonheart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven - This shines as bright as the magnitude of Deneb. A glowing piece. She walks through the constellation of your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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