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Angel Wings - Inspired by Caroline

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 12-17-1999 08:37 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Angel Wings

Angel wings
Gently around me
My soul sings
Ever so deeply
Feeling peaceful and
Ever so grand
Lovely and sound
Lifting high
Of the ground
Angel wings
Softly caress
This simple heart
In such a mess
Angel wings
Take me there
To that place
Heaven's Lair.



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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caroline
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1 posted 12-17-1999 08:53 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

You see?  You really do swish your Angel wings and lovely poetry noises rise out of your pen! Beautiful, DA  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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Angel girl, this is beautiful! Well met challenge I must say!  

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Jesus is the reason for the season

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Simply beautiful, Dark Angel! Lovely Angel Wings!  

 Denise


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4 posted 12-17-1999 12:21 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Lovely...simply lovely DA  


 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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5 posted 12-17-1999 12:41 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Beautiful in it's simplicity and lovely in it's form. . .

DarkAngel, perhaps you are not so dark. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Beautiful DA...beautiful  
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DA: Sounds like a peaceful moment, beautiful!

HUGS

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8 posted 12-17-1999 04:30 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sweet Caroline, Thanks you so much for your lovely comment  

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WhtDove, a comment that Caroline made inspired me to write this,   Thanks for your lovley comment Angel.
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Thanks so much Denise  
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Thank you Pepper  
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Sven, Thank you, Perhaps I'm not so Dark  
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Ruth thanks Hon so very much.  
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Yes very peaceful, thanks RG *HUGS*

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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9 posted 12-17-1999 07:10 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Ah, DA - this is so soft, I really like it.

K
Elizabeth Santos
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I feel warmed by the caress of angel wings
Beautiful
Liz
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It's very sweet.  I like the form, too.
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12 posted 12-17-1999 09:38 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

No darkness here, Angel. Beauty and light abounds.
Dark Angel
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Severn, Ellizabeth, Sandgrain and Balladeer, thank you all so very much  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Tres belle DA!!!!!!!
Your writing just gets better and better with every poem. May your angel wings always be there to carry you softly.......
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Your darkness is blessed with sunshine....
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16 posted 12-18-1999 11:40 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel -

On angel wings
you were sent ..
with this verse
of merriment.

I hear the whirring
of angel's wings.
In her heart
a song she brings.

*This is JUST LOVELY !


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Dark Angel
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Moonshine, thanks so much Hon  
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thats so sweet Nan thank you  
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Marge, such a lovely poem thank you  

Thank You All !

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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